Early bird I always want to be an early bird, which means a person who gets up early in the morning without much stress. However it is not that easy for me. Althogh I usually sleep enough to sustain m

Jiyoon Park

Early bird I always want to be an early bird, which means a person who gets up early in the morning without much stress. However it is not that easy for me. Althogh I usually sleep enough to sustain my health, I cannot easily get up in the morning. Every morning, I struggle to get off my bed. I have many things that I want to do in the morning such as reading books, running or so. So it makes me sad that I am not an early bird. Why do I need to sleep more than other people do?

Feb 28, 2015 3:57 PM

Corrections · 4

Wow, you're english is very good. I didn't really find any major gramatical errors. so i just adjusted your notebook to improve how natural it sounds. There just a couple areas where there could've been better word choices (stress vs trouble, get off my bed vs get out of my bed). Other than that, good job!

Early bird

I've always wanted to be an early bird; which means a person who gets up early in the morning without too much troublestress. However it is not that easy for me. Although I usually sleep enough to sustain my health, I cannot easily get up in the morning. Every morning, I struggle to get out ofoff my bed. I have many things that I want to do in the morning such as reading books, running or so**. So it makes me sad that I am not an early bird. Why do I need to sleep more than other people do?

** "and so on" or ", etc." either one works so you decide which one sounds more natural to you.

p.s. i'm a night owl too ^^ (but i'm pretending to be an early bird these days...it's really tiring T_T)

February 28, 2015

I am an early bird. When I was studying, I was a night owl and could get by with just 2 hours of sleep a night. I often saw the dawn just before catching a few hours of sleep. Now it is the reverse, I get up early before dawn. It helps to get things done before anyone else stirs in the house.

March 1, 2015