Arwen
Diary 28 Feb. Today, I went to Buxton. I like this town. It's not busy, I felt relaxed. When I was on the way on the train, the scenery of outside was very beautiful. I like the style of buildings. It's different from other towns and cities where I've been to. How pity it is, it was raining in the afternoon, so we canceled some places to visit.
Feb 28, 2015 11:32 PM
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Diary 28 Feb.

Today, I went to Buxton. I like this town. It's not busy, I felt relaxed.
When I was on the way on the train, the scenery of outside was very beautiful.
I like the style of buildings. It's different from other towns and cities which I've been to.
What a pity it is, it was raining in the afternoon, so we canceled some places to visit.

March 1, 2015
I like its buildings. This town is like countryside. There is still a town center which is less busy. I like "Pavilion Gardens", it's a nice and big park, it's amazing. I recommend you can visit this lovely town.
March 1, 2015
What was your favourite thing about Buxton? I have never been there, but you made it sound like a nice place to visit!
March 1, 2015
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