我也是恐龙
anyway the life this characters were writted 2014 year by myself. 这些文字是我写于2014年的, hope correct a lot for me 希望得到大家更多指正 anyway the life 无论如何生活 the length is equally 每天的长度是一样的 so ,everyday is meaningful to the life 所以对于生命来说每天都是有意义的 also, lie flat for finishing breache is a nice doing 即使躺着完成呼吸,也是美好的
Mar 1, 2015 1:03 PM
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 Whatever life    anyway 是个副词,后面不跟任何东西的。好多语法都错了,继续加油

this characters were writted in 2014 by me . 这些文字是我写于2014年的,

hope to correct a lot for me 希望得到大家更多指正

Whatever  life 无论如何生活

the length is equal.每天的长度是一样的

so ,everyday is meaningful to the life 所以对于生命来说每天都是有意义的

also, lying flat for finishing breath is a nice doing 即使躺着完成呼吸,也是美好的

March 1, 2015
谢谢,拿了一个小本子,记下你的建议了:)
March 2, 2015
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