something I don't know what I want to say,with the time goes ,I feel so loney ,I want to back to my hometown,I misss my father,mother,sister and my brother,I want to live a happy life with my family,b

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something I don't know what I want to say,with the time goes ,I feel so loney ,I want to back to my hometown,I misss my father,mother,sister and my brother,I want to live a happy life with my family,but I have a dream,I must come true my dream,I want to be a famous people someday,I want to go abroad to develope my work,so I should work hard at my study.

Mar 1, 2015 1:27 PM

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I don't know what I want to say. with the time goes With time going by, I feel so loney.

I want to go back to my hometown. I miss my father, mother, sister and my brother Family.

I want to live a happy life with my family but I have a dream.

I must come true my dream. I must make my dream come true.

I want to be a famous people person someday.

I want to go abroad to develop my work skills, so I should "study hard." work hard at my study.

Use periods "." and not commas "," at the end of your sentences.

March 1, 2015

Just to write something, anything...

I don't know what I want to say: as ,with the time passes goes , I feel so lonely/more and more lonely/homesick, I want to go back to my hometown, I miss my father, mother, sister and my brother; I want to live a happy life with my family. But I have a dream, and I must come true make my dream come true - I want to be a famous people some day, I want to go abroad to develop my career work, so I should work hard at my study.