My sisters I have four siblings, two sisters and two brothers. Today I want to talk about my sisters. I have a twin sister, she's almost graduating from(?) Law School, she's kind, generous, fun and re

Laiz

My sisters I have four siblings, two sisters and two brothers. Today I want to talk about my sisters. I have a twin sister, she's almost graduating from(?) Law School, she's kind, generous, fun and really smart. The other one is the youngest, she's 22 and was named after the actress Audrey Hepburn. She's got the best sense of humor ever, we laugh together 24/7. Her birthday (birth date?) is one(the?) day after mine and my twin's, a fun fact. I love talking to them, they're my best friends. Sometimes I quarrel with my twin, but I guess this is normal. She's always the first one to apologize, which I believe to be one of her best traits. :)

Mar 1, 2015 8:34 PM

Corrections · 11

My sisters

I have four siblings, two sisters and two brothers. Today I want to talk about my sisters. I have a twin sister, she almost graduating is soon to graduate/is graduating soon/will graduate soon from (correct) Law School. She's (two separate different facts, separate sentences or a conjunction) kind, generous, fun and really smart. The other one is the youngest (of the four), she's 22 and was/is named after the actress Audrey Hepburn. She's got the best sense of humor ever, we laugh together 24/7. Her birthday (birthday is correct, it ignores year - birth date? surely impossible - birthdate includes year!) is one/the (either is acceptable) day after mine and my twin's, a fun fact.
I love talking to them, they're my best friends. Sometimes I quarrel with my twin, but I guess this is normal. She's always the first one to apologize, which I believe to be one of her best traits.
:)

Good natural English! Fine!

March 5, 2015

My sisters

I have four siblings, two sisters and two brothers. Today I want to talk about my sisters. I have a twin sister, she's about to graduate from Law School, she's kind, generous, fun and really smart. The other one is the youngest, she's 22 and was named after the actress Audrey Hepburn. She's got the best sense of humor ever, we laugh together 24/7. Her birthday (correct) is one/the day after mine and she's my twin, a fun fact.

I love talking to them, they're my best friends. Sometimes I quarrel with my twin, but I guess this is normal. She's always the first one to apologize, which I believe to be one of her best traits. :)

March 1, 2015

Thank you, Justin :D

March 5, 2015

This is well written. Good job! Yes, you had it right, you say birthday if you're talking about the month/day. However, if you are talking about when someone was born (year, etc...) you would just say, "she was born on December 25, 1984." Make sense? You can say "one day after" or "the day after," both work. Hope you're doing well...keep practicing, you're doing great! Justin

March 5, 2015

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!