hongju Lee
E-mail to be used business Dear Mr. **** Good day Long time no see We are analyzing for deformation of profile parts by CAE. result may be coming out tomorrow. First of all after check the result,we review for this problem. and check to relation of mutual condition of thickness and injection stress. According to the result, we willl fix injection schedule. Thanks
Mar 2, 2015 6:59 AM
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E-mail to be used business

Dear Mr. ****

Good day

Long time no see

We are analyzing* for deformation of profile parts by CAE.
results may be coming out tomorrow.

 

*rather than analyzing, watching may be a better word choice. depending on what you are doing.

We are analyzing the deformation of profile parts by CAE.

We are watching for deformation of profile parts by CAE


First of all
after checking the results,we will review for this problem.
and check tothe relation of mutual conditions of thickness and injection stress.
According to the results, we willl fix the injection schedule.

Thank you,

*Thanks is informal, Thank you is more formal.

March 3, 2015
both make sense, it just depends on how you want to use it. If you are not sure when the results are coming out and it will most likely be tomorrow then use the first. If it is certain the results will come out tomorrow then use the latter.
March 3, 2015
result may be coming out tomorrow. -> The result will come tomorrow.
March 2, 2015
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