Ganwenlu
The First Day of School Today I have come back to my school.It means that my one-month winter vacation is over and a new term is coming. When I see my classmates,I feel a little strange and excited.Everyone gets his own changes after the long time. I can well remember that it was so easy and comfortable at home.Sometimes I might forget to study hard and do more and more positive things. It proves an old saying in China that the thought of not having to work was just too dangerous. I got the point.I realize that get busy living or get busy dying. I am supposed to study hard and return my families,teachers and the society with more excellent achievement.Because we live in this great era now. I can imagine how difficult the future life will be.I am getting older,and I should face more,even all.No matter higher and stricter requirement,I just choose to go ahead.Never give up.No way back. I hope the first day is a good beginning of making good changes.
Mar 2, 2015 4:03 PM
Corrections · 2
I love the way you express yourself! Your mistakes are mostly just with the way you construct your sentences.
March 23, 2015
I dont understand what you want to say your sentence structure is not got its create bit problem for readers
March 2, 2015
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