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Wonderful Rio The Rio de Janeiro is a beautiful city, but has a lot of problems too. There are wonderful landscapes contrasting with war tanks and heavily armed policemen holding big guns out of their cars. But it isn't enough for a security feeling. The city remains dangerous and all citizens know it. I've been living here for three years. I was originally from a small city with low violence, and all that things are still new for me. My friends have always told me to take care in public space with few people because the thieves would steal me. In the last year, my smartphone was stolen in the bus, and the man say "If you do something I'll kill you!". Then I learned: never use your smartphone in a bus here!
Mar 2, 2015 5:56 PM
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Wonderful Rio

The Rio de Janeiro is a beautiful city, but <em>it </em>has a lot of problems too. There are <em>W</em>onderful landscapes contrasting with war tanks and heavily armed policemen holding big guns out of their cars. But <em>this display </em>it isn't enough <em>to provide a feeling of security </em>for a security feeling. The city remains dangerous and all citizens know it.


I've been living here for three years. I was originally from a small city with low <em>without much </em>violence, and all that <em>these </em>things are still new for me. My friends have always told me to take care in public <em>alone </em>space with few people because the thieves would steal <em>rob </em>me. In the last year, my smartphone was stolen in <em>on </em>the bus, and the man <em>thief told me </em>"If you do something I'll kill you!". Then I learned: never use your smartphone <em>on </em>a bus here<em> in Rio</em>!

March 4, 2015

Wonderful Rio

The Rio de Janeiro is a beautiful city, but has a lot of problems too. There are wonderful landscapes contrasting contrasted with military war tanks and heavily armed policemen holding big guns out of their cars. But it isn't enough to feel secure. for a security feeling. The city remains dangerous and all citizens know it.
I've been living here for three years. I am was originally from a small city with low violence, and so all that these things are still new for me. My friends have always told me to take care in public places  space with where there are few people because the thieves might rob me. would steal me. In the last year, my smartphone was stolen on the bus, and the thief man said say "If you do anything something I'll kill you!". Then I learned to never use my your smartphone on a bus here!

March 2, 2015
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