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Wedding Party My friend is married yesterday and so wedding reception was took place. I was invited there. When I arrived at very refined a restaurant,several other friends have been there too. ''Congratulations on your wedding!''we said sincerely. The new husband and wife were in beautiful costume. I applauded them and my eyes were absorbed in several beauiful dishes. Because of buffet-style,I was fascinated every charm. ''Ah,I guess I cannot marry for a while,but tasty!''
Mar 3, 2015 9:26 AM
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Wedding Party

My friend is got married yesterday and afterwards the so wedding reception was took place.
I was invited there.
When I arrived at the very expensive/smart refined a restaurant, several other friends have been were already there too.
''Congratulations on your marriage wedding!''we said sincerely.
The new husband and wife were in beautiful costumes.
I applauded them and I saw my eyes were absorbed in several beautiful dishes at the buffet.
Because of buffet-style,I was fascinated every charm.
''Ah,I guess I cannot marry for a while, but the food was very tasty!''

March 3, 2015
Thank you very much!
March 3, 2015
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March 3, 2015

Wedding Party

My friend got married yesterday and then the wedding reception took place.
 I arrived in a very elegant restaurant, and several friends were there too.
''Congratulations on your wedding!'' we greeted them. 
The newly wedded couple looked sophisticated with the bride's bridal gown and the groom's suit and tie. I gave them an applause and I couldn't help but look at the tasty dishes that were prepared and it was a buffet style. It was a wonderful wedding celebration and the food was great!

 


 

March 3, 2015
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