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3.Which of the following inventions do you think has make the greatest impact on people in your country,the airplane ,the computer or the television?
In my opinion, the computer has changed people’s life in my country most significantly.Nowadays nearly every job requires certain proficiency in computers.But just a few decades ago people could find a satisfying job even they had no idea about computers.Also,the computer provides people a new way to relax.For example,most of my friends find that computers can set them free from work or studies and refresh themselves so that they can focus better on work or studies when coming back.

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3.Which of the following inventions do you think has made the greatest impact on people in your country, the airplane, the computer or the television?
In my opinion, the computer has changed people&rsquo;s life in my country most significantly. Nowadays nearly every job requires a certain proficiency in computers. But just a few decades ago people couldn't find a satisfying job even if they had no idea (OR, "if they didn't have any idea") about computers. Also, the computer provides people a new way to relax. For example, most of my friends find that computers can set them free from work or their studies and refresh themselves or relax, so that they can focus better on their work or studies when coming back.