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my dream life i am a girl who always dream of future . so the people around me think i am innocence . i ever just dreaming and do nothing . but now i realize that i must do truely things meanwhile dream my perfect life . so i want to improve my english during a short time and let me more outgoing .so i am glad you can make friends with me . thanks for your help on my composition~ i believe we can get a perfect life!fighting for dream!
Mar 3, 2015 2:07 PM
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My dream life

I am a girl who always dreams of the futureso the people around me think I am innocentce .
I ever sometimes just dreaming and do nothingbut now I realize that I must do truely things take some action meanwhile dreaming of my perfect life. 
so That is why I want to improve my English during a short period of time and let me become more outgoing. I would be am glad if you can will make friends with me .
Thanks for your help on my composition (text/entry)~
I believe we can get a perfect life! Fighting for a dream!

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The ”I” pronoun in English is written in capital letter at all times. 

”Innocent” is the adjective, ”innocence” is the noun.
 

You are welcome! Good luck with your studies! 

March 3, 2015
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