Jiyoon Park
Spring Nowadays, I am feeling that the weather is more chilly than usual. It is annoying that when I go out the door to go to work, the freezing cold wind blows to my face right away. I think March is spring, but it seems like the weather of it is not spring's. I really hope that 'real' spring comes to here soon. Actually, I am already worried about tomorrow's morning temperature.
Mar 3, 2015 2:42 PM
Corrections · 3

<em>Since you're at a high level I corrected the notebook with a focus more on sounding fluent than grammar.  Native speakers use grammar rules loosely so don't worry too much about grammar either if you want to sound native :p</em>

 

Spring

Nowadays, I am feeling like that the weather is chillier than usual*. It is annoying that when I go out the door to go to work, the freezing cold wind blows into my face right away. I think March is spring, but it doesn't (feel/seems) like the weather of it is not spring's**. I really hope that the 'real' spring comes to here soon. Actually, I am already worried about tomorrow's morning temperature.

 

<em>*native speakers are lazy. the less words the better so generally use adjectives like chillier, colder, hotter, etc. rather than "more chilly, more hot, etc."</em>

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<em>**that fact that you're talking about the weather is implied by the context the sentence is used in, so it sounds unnatural to put it in. </em>

 

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great job! I am being really scrutinous because you're at such a high level. you wrote a grammatically sound entry, the next step is writing like a native english writer. you're almost there!

 

tip for the future:

-like i said earlier, native speakers are lazy so we try to reduce the amount of words whenever we can. if you're writing informally, you can use contractions like I'm, can't, won't, etc.

March 3, 2015
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