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Why I am not that woman you fall in love.. I have come to the conclusion that I am not that woman you fall in love. Maybe it's the woman you respect, or you admire. I am That woman who forces you to question perspectives which have been living for years. The woman who finishes with these preconceived notions you have of the things you love, the woman that you look and you wonder: How does that? The woman you are looking for when you need strength and support, the woman who makes you realize how big it can become the world. However, I am not the woman you fall in love. I'm not the girl you want to spend hours just watching her , the girl that you try to make smile her, the girl whose hands who are intertwined with your hands. I am not that girl so beautiful, so delicate, that makes you want to fight the world for her. I'm not that woman that you have to protect, because I'm not fragile enough to break anything. I am hardened, and I have battle scars that perhaps maybe same to like his. I am not ashamed of the marks, stains and bruises that you find in my soul, they are mine and are part of my story. I will not walk behind you, I'll walk with you. I'm going to push you as much as I push myself. This makes me a difficult person to love, because sometimes you will have to give in and it will cost. Maybe you go just because you found a girl makes you happy instead of that makes you think. I'm not that woman you fall in love, I am that woman that you learn to love.
Mar 3, 2015 6:17 PM
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Why I am not that woman you fall in love with..

I have come to the conclusion that I am not that woman you fall in love with. Maybe it's the woman you respect, or you admire. (Not sure if your are talking about yourself or another women here?) I am that woman who forces you to question perspectives which you have been living had for years. The woman who finishes with these stops the preconceived notions you have of the things you love, the woman that you look at and you wonder: How does she do that? The woman you are looking for when you need strength and support, the woman who makes you realize how big it can become the world can become. (Not sure what you mean here?)

However, I am not the woman you fall in love with. I'm not the girl you want to spend hours just watching her , the girl that you try to make smile her, the girl whose hands who are intertwined with your hands. I am not that girl, so beautiful, so delicate, that makes you want to fight the world for her.

I'm not that woman that you have to protect, because I'm not fragile enough to break anything. I am hardened, and I have battle scars that perhaps maybe same to are like his. I am not ashamed of the marks, stains and bruises that you find in my soul, they are mine and are part of my story. I will not walk behind you, I'll walk with you. I'm going to push you as much as I push myself.

This makes me a difficult person to love, because sometimes you will have to give in and it will cost you. Maybe you go just because you found want a girl that makes you happy instead of one that makes you think.

I'm not that woman you fall in love with, I am that woman that you learn to love.

 

Hope my corrections help. 

Peace

Alasdair

March 3, 2015
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