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Quiet Today class went to see a quiet room. There are many interesting works. One of my favorite is four seasons on the quilt, I can’t remember that name, but I really like it , because I can know about four seasons in Wisconsin in the quilt and I like different seasons together became a work, it is beautiful. I don’t know actor’s name, but I think the person is woman and she likes four seasons.
Mar 3, 2015 6:29 PM
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Quiet

Today class went to see a quiet room with art displayed, There are many interesting works there. One of my favorites is four seasons on the a quilt, I can’t remember the title that name, but I really liked it , because I can know learned about four seasons in Wisconsin, in the quilt and I like different seasons together they became a work of art together, it is beautiful. I don’t know actor’s the artists name, but I think that it was done by a woman the person is woman and she likes all four seasons.

 

could also read: today class went to a gallery,

or:today class went to a quite room filled with art,


could also say: but I think that it was done by a woman, and I believe that she must love all four seasons of the year.

March 4, 2015

Quiet

Today, class went to see a (Film called the<I am not sure if this belongs here or not is this about a documentry? or an art exibit?) quiet room. There are many interesting works. One of my favorites is four seasons on the a quilt, I can’t remember that name title, but I really liked it , because I can learn know about  four seasons  of the year in Wisconsin, in the quilt and I like different seasons, together they became a work(<not sure how to re phrase work do you mean a work of art?), it is beautiful. I don’t know actor’s name, but I think the person is a woman and she likes four seasons.

 

needs more editing, but I will wait for a coment from you becouse I do not want to change the meaning of what you are writing about 

March 3, 2015

Quiet

Today the class went to see an exhibition at the museum of art(?) quiet room. There are many interesting works. One of my favorites is "four seasons" portrayed on the a quilt, I can’t remember that exhibit's name, but I really like it, because I can know the quilt tells me about the four seasons in Wisconsin in the quilt and I like different seasons put together became to become a work of art, it is beautiful. I don’t know actor’s artist's name, but I think the person is a woman and she likes the four seasons.

March 5, 2015
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