Sieira
Talk about my preferences when I travel (Rather vs. Prefer) When I travel on Holidays I would rather not visit major cities. I prefer to go in the green countryside. I prefer enjoying quiet walks through the natural environments or to stroll around charming small seaside towns than to visit museums in big cities (This type of activities can be done during the rest of the year) so when I book accommodation I’d rather find out rural charming hotel. One of the amenities more important for me and that I value the most when I stay in a hotel would the Room cleaning Service but also and above all is that the hotel has a good and warm bed. The bed probably might be one the most important thing but I also value very much a quiet room I don’t care to have a wonderful bed if I can’t rest good enougyh because the room isn’t quiet enough. And if have options, I’d rather stay in an environmentally sustainable hotel, this is another important amenities that I take into account.
Mar 3, 2015 9:56 PM
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Talk about my preferences when I travel (Rather vs. Prefer)

When I travel on Holidays I would rather not visit major cities. I prefer to go in (much better: visit) the green countryside. I prefer enjoying quiet walks through the natural environments or to stroll around charming small seaside towns than to visit museums in big cities (This type of activity can be done during the rest of the year) so when I book an accommodation I’d rather find a out rural charming rural hotel.
One of the amenities more important for me and that I value the most when I stay in a hotel would the Room cleaning Service but also and above all is that the hotel has a good and warm bed. The bed probably might be one of the most important things but I also value very much a quiet room.  I don’t care to have a wonderful bed if I can’t rest good well enough because the room isn’t quiet (enough).
And if have options, I’d rather stay in an environmentally friendly hotel, this is another important consideration that I take into account.

March 3, 2015

Talk about my preferences when I travel (Rather vs. Prefer)

When I travel on holidays I would rather not visit major cities. I prefer to go into the green countryside. I prefer enjoying quiet walks through the natural environments or to stroll around charming small seaside towns than to visit museums in big cities (This type of activities activity (<em>or</em> these types of activities) can be done during the rest of the year) so when I book accommodation I’d rather find out a rural charming rural hotel.
One of the amenities more important for me and that I value the most when I stay in a hotel would be the Room cleaning Service but also and above all is that the hotel has a good and warm bed. The bed probably might be one of the most important things but I also value very much a quiet room. I don’t care to have a wonderful bed if I can’t rest good well enough because the room isn’t quiet enough.
And if have options the option, I’d rather stay in an environmentally sustainable hotel, this is another important amenities feature that I take into account.

 

Very good Sieira. My corrections are in red and my suggestions to sound more natural are in blue/grey.

Environmental sustainability is not really an "amenity" (something that the hotel offers its guests), which is why James and I corrected it to "feature" or "consideration" (both of which have slightly different meanings but are both appropriate in this context).

March 4, 2015
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