Parisa
Please revise my essay; same curriculum or not? Topic ;A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. Curriculum in different schools must be include of some common curriculum; schools are usually the first step to enter the society and usually no one is certain that where is his or her destination. Sometimes this destination is a remote area and the student does not have enough information about their peoples’ lifestyle and also the habitants in this area have no information about the new comer; so, if the curriculum has some common parts, student probably would not have much difficulty for interacting with habitants in new society and also vice versa; because two sides have mutual learning. On the other hand, a nation consists of diverse unions and each of them has particular features and their values may be different from each other. However, all of members in a whole nation should be respect to each other and do not scold others’ principals; this respect usually comes from cognition and the best time and the best way for reaching it is the school time and via the school curriculum. Besides, if we believe that our culture is valuable, we should spread it and the imperative thing for scattering something is having sufficient knowledge about it; thus, a nation should allocate a part of the curriculum exclusively according to the various parts of the nations; with this method student can obtain professional information about their cultures and ultimately they can introduce their cultures better; otherwise, the original cultures may deteriorate little by little and we may expect an insipid uniform culture which lacks of subtle differences. To sum up, in my notion, despite the fact that a common curriculum is imperative for being ready to enter to every kind of situations, a nation should not forgot the exclusive values of various cultures and this matter does not obviate with the same curriculum
Mar 4, 2015 10:43 AM