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short story. Could someone correct this for me? Thanks One day, I was driving on my way to work and suddenly a cat crossed through my car, so I ran over him, at the same time a car crassed into my car.-
Mar 4, 2015 12:50 PM
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short story. Could someone correct this for me? Thanks

One day, I was driving on my way to work and then suddenly, a cat crossed the street through my car, so I ran over it. him, at the same time Also, a car crashsed into my car at the same time.-

March 4, 2015

short story. Could someone correct this for me? Thanks

One day, I was driving on my way to work and when suddenly a cat crossed through in front of my car, so I ran over him. At the same time another car crashed into my car mine.-

 

Oh dear. I hope that was a trory and not a real event!

My corrections are in red and my suggestions to sound more natural are in blue/grey.

March 4, 2015
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