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Dear FutureMe Dear FutureMe, I'm writing to see how you’re doing and because I would like to know how you have got yours dreams and achievements. Read this letter now will be an interesting decision in order to analyze the past. You'll probably be living alone or with a couple. I might even be buying an own house in the centre of Madrid, such as you always had wanted. You'll also be getting a new job when I hope you'll be feeling satisfied. Moreover, you'll probably be earning a good salary therefore your situation will be better than the past. Respect to your pets I hope very much they'll be healthy and they'll be playing such as they have played until now You could have moved to another country for working in a foreign company. Maybe you'll have achieved an appropriate job and you will be accepted. Yeah, I like this idea! But somehow, I doubt it. I hope by now you have found a great person to live together. I also hope you'll be spending enough time with him and with your family. Remember to keep in touch with old your friend. Don't mind if you haven't talking in so much time. Go to bed early so that you can get up with good humour the next day. Finally I wish I could be there with you to see your face while you are reading this letter. I wish most of these things have been met. Certainly, did they do something to change the Spanish economical situation? Did the government do something to reduce unemployment? Look after yourself
Mar 4, 2015 8:29 PM
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Dear FutureMe

Dear FutureMe,



I'm writing to see how you’re doing and because I would like to know how you have got on with yours dreams and achievements. Reading this letter now will be an interesting decision in order to analyze the past.

You'll probably be living alone or with a couple partner. I might even be buying an my own house (<em>or</em> buying a house of my own) in the centre of Madrid, such as you always had always wanted. You'll also be getting a new job when where I hope you'll be feeling satisfied. Moreover, you'll probably be earning a good salary therefore your situation will be better than in the past.
With respect to your pets I hope very much they'll be healthy and they'll be playing such as they have played until now that they're still playing like they used to play.

You could might have moved to another country for working to work in a foreign company. Maybe you'll have achieved found an appropriate job and you will be accepted. Yeah, I like this idea! But somehow, I doubt it.

I hope by now you have found a great person to live together with (<em>or</em> person to live together with). I also hope you'll be spending enough time with him and with your family. Remember to keep in touch with old your old friend. Don't mind worry if you haven't been talking in so much time (<em>or</em> haven't been talking for a long time). Go to bed early so that you can get up with good humour the next day.

Finally I wish I could be there with you to see your face while you are reading this letter. I wish hope that most of these things have been met. Certainly Also, did they do something to change the Spanish economical situation? Did the government do something to reduce unemployment?

Look after yourself

 

Very clever, and a good way to practice different tenses. Well done!

My corrections are in red and my suggestions to sound more natural are in blue/grey.

March 4, 2015
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March 4, 2015
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