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阳光灿烂的日子 我最喜欢的一个电影是“阳光灿烂的日子”。 导演是姜文。他也是演员。 这个电影是他的自传故事。 主角“马小军”的别名是猴子。 他的爸爸是军人。他离远点出差。 马小军私自进“米兰”的房去。 背景是文化大革命时候的北京。 我不知道中国的历史。 通过描写青小年的一个夏天,作家要表现那个时期。 我喜欢结末。 One of my favorite movie is “In the heat of the sun”. The director is Jiang Wen. He is also an actor. This movie is his autobiographical story. The main character Ma Xiao Jun’s nick name is Monkey. His father is a soldier. He is dispatched far away. Ma Xiao Jun sneaks into Miran’s house. The setting is Beijing during the Cultural Revolution. I don’t know the Chinese history. By depicting a teenager’s summer, the director wanted to express that period. I like the ending. 我感谢你修改。
Mar 5, 2015 2:49 PM
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阳光灿烂的日子

我最喜欢的一个电影是“阳光灿烂的日子”。
导演是姜文。他一个演员。
这个电影是他的自传故事
主角“马小军”的别名(绰号)是猴子。
他的爸爸是军人。他离远点去很远的地方出差。
马小军私自进“米兰”的房间。
背景是文化大革命时候的北京。
我不知道太了解中国的历史。
通过描写青小年的一个夏天,作家表现那个时期(的什么什么东西)。 

我喜欢结

One of my favorite movie is “In the heat of the sun”.
The director is Jiang Wen. He is also an actor.
This movie is his autobiographical story.
The main character Ma Xiao Jun’s nick name is Monkey.
His father is a soldier. He is dispatched far away.
Ma Xiao Jun sneaks into Miran’s house.
The setting is Beijing during the Cultural Revolution.
I don’t know the Chinese history.
By depicting a teenager’s summer, the director wanted to express that period.
I like the ending.

我感谢你修改。

March 7, 2015

阳光灿烂的日子

我最喜欢的一个电影是“阳光灿烂的日子”。
导演是姜文。他也是演员。
这个电影是他的自传故事
主角“马小军”的别名是猴子。
他的爸爸是军人。他离远点很远的地方出差。
马小军私自偷偷溜进“米兰”的房
背景是文化大革命时候的北京。
我不知道中国的历史。
通过描写青小年小青年的一个夏天,作家要表现那个时期。
我喜欢结

One of my favorite movie is “In the heat of the sun”.
The director is Jiang Wen. He is also an actor.
This movie is his autobiographical story.
The main character Ma Xiao Jun’s nick name is Monkey.
His father is a soldier. He is dispatched far away.
Ma Xiao Jun sneaks into Miran’s house.
The setting is Beijing during the Cultural Revolution.
I don’t know the Chinese history.
By depicting a teenager’s summer, the director wanted to express that period.
I like the ending.

我感谢你修改。

March 5, 2015
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March 6, 2015
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March 6, 2015
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