Antonio Tenorio
FALLING ASLEEP Few days ago I got home as usual, had dinner as usual, made a phone call to my wife as usual, and as I'm get used to doing took my iPad and began to watch an interesting video on Skype. After starting that video I suddenly fell asleep and woke up at five thirty in the morning without knowing why I was dressed up, why the light of my room was turned on, why I didn't brushed my teeth, why I was allready seated on my bed, and why the hell I woke up before my usual weak up time what is seven o'clock. I have to recognize that I felt a bit tired but it's the first time that it happen to me what concerns me a lot becouse of the possibility that I could suffer that sort of behavior by driving home, so my advise not only to my self but also to the whole Italki community is minding the hours we spend working without sleeping.
Mar 5, 2015 9:55 PM
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FALLING ASLEEP

A few days ago I got home as usual, had dinner as usual, made a phone call to my wife as usual, and as I'm get used to doing took my iPad and began to watch an interesting video on Skype. After starting that video I suddenly fell asleep and woke up at five thirty in the morning without knowing why I was dressed up, why the light in my room was turned on, why I didn't brushed my teeth, why I was already seated on my bed, and why the hell I woke up before my usual wake up time, which is seven o'clock.

I have to admit that I felt a bit tired but it's the first time that that has happened to me, which concerns me a lot because of the possibility that I could suffer from that sort of behavior while driving home, so my advice not only to myself but also to the whole Italki community is to mind the hours we spend working without sleeping.

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Your English sounds very natural. 

"Advice" is a noun. "Advise" is a verb. "I give him advice." "I will advise him."

 

Be safe!

 

March 5, 2015
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FALLING ASLEEP

<em>I added a few more that I think need to be added.  Viste videos en skype? Te refieres a youtube?</em>

 

Few days ago I got home as usual, had dinner as usual, made a phone call to my wife as usual, and as i am used to doing I took my iPad and began to watch an interesting video on Skype. After starting that video I suddenly fell asleep and woke up at five thirty in the morning without knowing why I was dressed up, why the light of my room was turned on, why I didn't brush my teeth, why I was aleady seated on my bed, and why the hell I woke up before my usual wake up time what is seven o'clock.

I have to recognize that I felt a bit tired but it's the first time that it happen to me what concerns me a lot becouse of the possibility that I could suffer that sort of behavior by driving home, so my advise not only to my self but also to the whole Italki community is to limit the hours we spend working without sleeping.

March 6, 2015
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