Ferchu
A Woman (an odd creature) They are odd creatures because they are the living representation of beauty. And They can really look beautiful, outstanding! in their gorgeous black dresses and high heels, with a perfect hair and make up. But do not feel so surprised, if you find they more beautiful in the next morning when their hair is no longer perfect, they are not wearing any make-up, and the dress is gone. She looks lovely in their wedding dress, and You find yourself lost in that beauty, but then you realize she is really beautiful, when you look at her wearing your old shirt, being barefoot in your kitchen, making you breakfast as your wife. When you see her as beautiful as ever, during those months that her body changes as the same time your child grows inside her. They show you their true beauty, when they love, because they are capable of feel a tremendous love. They also have a unique beauty in their heart, because it's soft, but do not mistake softness with weakness, because inside a woman's heart lies a strength that is able to change the world. You must be aware of this: if you don't respect them, love them and take care of them, all that beauty will be gone. And again, You will be destroying another beauty of this world.
Mar 6, 2015 4:23 AM
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They are odd creatures because they are the living representation of beauty.
And They can really look beautiful, outstanding EVEN! in their gorgeous black dresses and high heels, with THEIR perfect hair and make up.

But do not feel so surprised, if you find they ARE more beautiful the next morning when their hair is no longer perfect, they are not wearing any make-up, and the dress is gone.

She looks lovely in HER wedding dress, and You find yourself lost in that beauty, but then you realize she is really beautiful, when you look at her wearing your old shirt, being barefoot in your kitchen, making you breakfast as your wife.

When you see her as beautiful as ever, during those months that her body changes AT the same time your child grows inside her.

They show you their true beauty, when they love, because they are capable of FEELING tremendous love.

They also have a unique beauty in their heart, because it's soft, but do not mistake softness with weakness, because inside a woman's heart lies a strength that is able to change the world.
You must be aware of this: if you don't respect them, love them and take care of them, all that beauty will be gone.
And again, You will be destroying another beauty of this world.

 

First off ^ so true, this is really poetic! It is really well done!
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March 6, 2015
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