Feasibility assessment on deaf people project The company intends to carry out many different activities, in order to investigate the opportunity for a wider deployment of the service in more European

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Feasibility assessment on deaf people project The company intends to carry out many different activities, in order to investigate the opportunity for a wider deployment of the service in more European Union (EU) Countries, and for a deeper market uptake. First of all, the company wants to do a market study on the current services offered for deaf people in the European Union to decide where and how introduce E-Lisir project in a specific European country. The Feasibility assessment will be based on two different methodologies: - 1) Desk research basically involved in collecting data from existing resources:This kind of research can be conducted in starting phase of the assessment. It’s very effective and the information understood can be used as benchmark in the research process. - 2) Field analisys based on effective research with a direct contacts with the existing market and with the specific players. The union of two kind of analysis lead to the final result of the study. The technical activities will be focus on the study of technological and technical solution to develop the project in the new contest and the analisys to decide the size of the project and the specific location. The economic assessment will be focus on local stakeholders analysis,market and competitors survey, stategy analisys and a real business plan to identify the operation’s monetary results. Part of all assessment is the cost and benefit analysis, very important in this kind of project with a strong social impact, to verify the real social return of the project togheter with all other described aspects.

Mar 6, 2015 2:59 PM

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I am very sorry, it isn't write written correctly in the correct way. The kind of work is the feasibility study (or feasibility assessment, I think they are the same thing) more than a market study. I will try to re-write the period paragraph trying to use easy words and less passive as you suggested in a previous correction:

This is a lot better. Well done! However, it still needs some work.

The company intends to investigate the opportunity for a wider deployment and a deeper market penetration uptake. of for the video remote interpreting service in one or two eastern European Union (EU) Countries. (Eastern with a capital E refers to living or originating from the regions to the east of Europe.)

In order to get achieve this goal, the company will carry out a feasibilty study based on two methodologies: - (Look at the bulleting punctuation guide. I realise that, unlike the correction editor, the comment feature strips the formatting to some extent.)

1) A desk research literature search? to collect data about the state of the art of the issue. (mmmm I don't think you can have state of the art of an issue. I don't understand what this sentence means.) It will be realized This will be done at the beginning of the feasibility study. The information collected will be used as a benchmark during the rest of the research process. -

2) Field research to verify the existing market and specific competitors. (This isn't right. What specifically are you trying to verify about the exisiting market and competitors?)

The combined results of these two studies will form the basis of the feasibility study. the two researches represents the feasibility study. Moreover, it will be important to take into account which ICT solutions will be founded to furher implement the current technological development of the project. (I don't know what you mean with this. Maybe: "It will be important to determine which ICT solutions will be required to implement the service."?)

The feasibility study will also concern make an economic assessment to be done. It that will be focus on:

• local stakeholders analysis; (jargon)

• market and competitors survey;

• stategy analisys analysis; and

• a real business plan to identify the operation’s profitability? monetary results.

(I'm not really sure how all of these things are part of an economic assessment. Maybe different words are required?)

To conclude, a cost and benefit cost-benefit analysis will be made carried out. It This is very important in such a project due to its strong social impact. (why?) The cost and benefit cost-benefit analysis will verify the real validate the true social return of the project along with all other described aspects. (Not sure what you mean by: "… all other described aspects.".)

March 8, 2015

I am very sorry, it isn't write in the correct way. The kind of work is the feasibility study (or feasibility assessment, I think they are the same thing) more than a market study. I try to re-write the period trying to use easy words and less passive as you suggest in previous correction: The company intends to investigate the opportunity for a wider deployment and a deeper market uptake. of the video remote interpreting service in one or two Eastern European Union (EU) Countries, In order to get this goal, the company will carry out a feasibilty study based on two methodologies: - 1) A desk research to collect data about the state of the art of the issue. It will be realized at the beginning of the feasibility study. The information collected will be used as benchmark during the research process. - 2) A field research to verify the existing market and specific competitors. The combined result of the two researches represents the feasibility study. Moreover, it will be important to take into account which ICT solutions will be founded to furher implement the current technological development of the project. The feasibility study will also concern an economic assessment to be done. It will be focus on local stakeholders analysis,market and competitors survey, stategy analisys and a real business plan to identify the operation’s monetary results. To conclude, a cost and benefit analysis will be carried out. It is very important in such a project due to its strong social impact. The cost and benefit analysis will verify the real social return of the project along with all other described aspects.

March 6, 2015

It's very difficult to correct this one because I can't work out what the structure is. Is the "market study" the first of the activities that the company wishes to carry out and then the various assessments part of that "market study"?

March 6, 2015

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