Ronan Holland
苹果手机五C 今天我去超市，因为我想苹果五C，因为我要为的工作。我很喜欢苹果东西。 I bought an iPhone 5c today in the supermarket as I needed a phone for work. I LOVE apple products.
Mar 6, 2015 11:04 PM
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苹果手机五C

今天我去超市，因为我想买个苹果五C，[Correcting as per your English] 因为我要用於为的工作 [Correcting without changing your original structure, this is classical Chinese style.  For a more colloquial style, it would "因為工作上要用]。我很喜欢苹果产品东西。

I bought an iPhone 5c today in the supermarket as I needed a phone for work. I LOVE apple products.

March 7, 2015
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苹果手机五C

今天我去超市，因为我想买了一个苹果五C，因为我要为的工作需要。我很喜欢苹果东西的产品。

I bought an iPhone 5c today in the supermarket as I needed a phone for work. I LOVE apple products.

March 6, 2015

苹果手机五C

今天我去超市了，我想苹果五C，因为工作需要。我很喜欢苹果公司的产品。

I bought an iPhone 5c today in the supermarket as I needed a phone for work. I LOVE apple products.

March 7, 2015
因为我的工作需要，所以今天我去超市买了Iphone 5C, 我很喜欢苹果的产品.
March 7, 2015

苹果手机五C

今天我去超市，因为我想买了苹果五C，因为我要为的工作需要手机。我很喜欢苹果东西的产品。

I bought an iPhone 5c today in the supermarket as I needed a phone for work. I LOVE apple products.

March 7, 2015
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Ronan Holland
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English, Spanish, Thai
Learning Language
Chinese (Mandarin), Spanish, Thai
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