Overall, the message contained the good grammer and sentence structure.  The following are just suggestions to "The latest menu of STARBUCKS":

Today, I tried the latest drink of STARBUCKS, which was called an "ALMOND MILK LATTE."  It was pretty good!

I love sweet drinks, especially those made at STARBUCKS, because of the opportunity to customize your selection. For instane, I always order it with extra cream. 

Although I try to limit my consumption of sweets, I often want to drink it when I'm feeling tired. It seems I can't help myself when I pass nearby a STARBUCKS coffee shop.

Anyway, I recommend it.
Try it!

The latest menu of Starbucks

I tried the latest drink of Starbucks today.
It's called Almond Milk Latte.
It was pretty good!

I love sweet drinks, especially from Starbucks.
Because we can order drinks that are custom-made there.
I always order my drink with extra cream.

When I'm tired, I feel like I want to drink it (be more specific with "it" please).
I try to not have to many sweets.
But I can't help having a drink of Starbucks when I look in the shops.

Anyway, I recommend it(be more specific with "it" please).

Try it!

(I don't like sweet drinks, I drink sriracha sause instead, and I breathe fire. Just kidding, I like sweet drinks, and I don't breathe fire)

The latest menu of STARBUCKS

I tried the latest drink of STARBUCKS today.
It's 'ALMOND MILK LATTE'.
It was pretty good!

I love sweet drinks especially from STARBUCKS.
Because we can order drinks that are custom-made there.
I always order with extra cream.

When I'm tired, I feel that I want to drink it.
I try to not have to many sweets.
But I can't help having a drink of STARBUCKS when I look in the shops.

Anyway, I recommend it.
Try it!

The latest menu of STARBUCKS

I tried the latest drink of STARBUCKS today.
It's an 'ALMOND MILK LATTE'.
It was pretty good!

I love sweet drinks, especially from STARBUCKS.
Because we can order drinks that are custom-made there.
I always order with extra cream.

When I'm tired, I feel like I want to drink it.
But I try to not to eat as many sweets.
But I can't help but have drink of STARBUCKS when I look the shop.

Anyway, I recommend it.
Try it!

The latest menu of Starbucks.

I tried the latest drink of STARBUCKS today. It's called Almond Milk Latte. It was pretty tastes good!

I love sweet drinks especially from Starbucks because we can order drinks with custom-made drinks there. I always order with extra cream.

When I'm tired, I feel like I want to drink it.

I try to not to take too as much as have any sweets, but I can't help having a drink from Starbucks everytime I see the shop.

Anyway, I recommend it.
Try it!