Kumiko
Professional Teacher
Self-introduction video script to apply for a tutor Hi everyone. I'm going to apply for a tutor of Japanese language on italki. It would be really appreciated if you could correct my video script to make it sound nicer and more natural. Better expressions and any other advice would be also welcomed. I'll practice with this again and again, then record a video soon. Thanks a lot for your help in advance! -- Hello, I'm Kumiko. I live in Tokyo, Japan. I've been learning how to teach Japanese professionally. On italki, I got to know so many people in the world are learning Japanese and are interested in our culture, which made me seriously think of being a Japanese teacher to help those who struggle with the language alone and look for native speakers to practice with. I have several business experiences in which communication and solution really count. For example, a helpdesk rep, a consultant, a sales, a recruitment staff, an event organizer, etc. I love to hear customer's voice to find out the best solutions together. Tell me how you want to make your dreams come true by using Japanese language skills. Tell me how you want to practice with native speakers. Let's figure out tangible learning strategies for you which will lead you to a big goal. We talk in Japanese as mush as possible because it's your time to practice, but you can ask me questions in English when needed. We concentrate on conversation during a session, then I'll give you a brief feedback at the end. Let's talk a lot in Japanese with fun for your dreams!
Mar 19, 2015 6:23 AM
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Hello, I'm Kumiko. I live in Tokyo, Japan. 

I've been learning how to teach Japanese professionally.

On italki, I got to know so many people in from all over the world who are learning Japanese and are interested in our culture, which made me seriously think seriously of about being a Japanese teacher to help those who struggle are struggling alone with the language alone and those who are looking for native speakers to practice with.

I have several extensive business experiences in which communication and solution really count. For example, I have been a helpdesk rep, a consultant, a sales, a recruitment staff, an event organizer, etc. I love to hear listening to customer's voice customers to find and working out the best solutions together.

Tell me how you want would like to make fulfil your dreams come true by using Japanese language skills.
Tell me how you want would like to practice with native speakers.
Let's figure out tangible learning strategies for you which will lead you to a big goal success/achieve your goals

We would talk speak in Japanese as mush as possible because it's your time to practice, but you can may ask me questions in English when needed.
We would concentrate on conversation skills during a sessions, then and I'll give you a brief feedback at the end of each session.

Let's talk a lot have fun speaking in Japanese with fun for to fulfil your dreams!

 

PS: good luck, Kumiko! I'm sure you'll be an awesome Japanese language teacher! :D

March 19, 2015

Self-introduction video script to apply for a tutor

Hi everyone. I'm going to apply for a tutor of Japanese language on italki. It would be really appreciated if you could correct my video script to make it sound nicer and more natural. Better expressions and any other advice would be also welcomed. I'll practice with this again and again, then record a video soon.

Thanks a lot for your help in advance!


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Hello, I'm Kumiko. I live in Tokyo, Japan.
I've been learning how to teach Japanese professionally.

When I started using italki, I realized many people in the world are learning Japanese and are interested in our culture, which made me seriously think about becoming a Japanese teacher to help those who struggle with the language alone and look for native speakers to practice with.

I've had several business experiences in which communication and problem solving were very important. For example, a helpdesk rep, a consultant, a sales, a recruitment staff, an event organizer, etc. I love to listening to customers to find the best solution together.

Tell me how Japanese language skills will help your dreams come true.
Tell me how you would like to practice with native speakers.
Let's develop learning strategies which will lead you to a big goal.

We will talk in Japanese as mush as possible because it's your time to practice, but you can ask me questions in English when needed.


We will concentrate on conversation during a session, then I'll give you a brief feedback at the end.

Let's have fun talking in Japanese and achieve your dreams!






NOTE: I think this was very good to begin with! I made it sound a little more natural, but still very professional. Feel free to message me if you want any more help with written English!

March 30, 2015

Hello, I'm Kumiko. I live in Tokyo, Japan. 

I've been learning how to teach Japanese professionally.

On italki, I found out many people in the world are learning Japanese and are interested in our culture, which made me decide to become a Japanese teacher to help those who struggle with the language alone and look for native speakers to practice with.

I've had several business experiences in which communication and problem solving really counted. For example, I worked as a helpdesk rep, a consultant, a salesperson, a recruiter, an event organizer, etc. I listen to the customer's ideas to find out the best solutions together.

Tell me how you want to make your dreams come true by using Japanese language skills.
Tell me how you want to practice with native speakers.
Let's figure out tangible learning strategies for you which will lead you to your goal.

We talk in Japanese as mush as possible because it's your time to practice, but you can ask me questions in English when needed.
We concentrate on conversation during a session, then I'll give you a brief feedback at the end.

Let's talk a lot in Japanese, have fun, and acheive your dreams!

 

Nice job Kumiko!

March 30, 2015
Hi! I know several people have helped you with corrections already but I noticed something that has been missed close to the end of your script you say "We will talk in Japanese as mush as possible..." To correct this you need to change "mush" to "much" to use the correct word, I hope this helps!
April 1, 2015
Thanks for the nice advice ;)
March 20, 2015
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