Takafumi
Korean BBQ I went to eat yakiniku with my office member. Yakiniku is Korean style BBQ. Oh, my topics are almost eating. I live to eat! Hahaha( ^ω^ )
Mar 20, 2015 3:31 PM
Corrections · 3

Korean BBQ("barbecue", for your information)

I went to eat yakiniku with my office membercolleagues.
Yakiniku is Korean style BBQ.
Oh, my topics are almost all about eating.
I live to eat! Hahaha( ^ω^ )

 

 

miss Asian  food... :((

March 21, 2015

Korean BBQ
I went to eat yakiniku with my colleagues from the office.
Yakiniku is a type of barbecue originally from Korea.
Oh, my topics are almost all about eating.
I live to eat! Hahaha ( ^ω^ )

 

NOTES:

1. Pronounced "barbecue" but I'm sure you know that.
2. "colleagues from the [...]" is better to use.

3. changed the whole sentence, makes more sense to say it's a type of [...] from [...]

4. It's better to use the full word "barbecue", especially if you will use it as a verb. (to barbecue)

5. changed the sentence, see no. 3

6. sentence was missing something to make sense 

March 28, 2015
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