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I decided to go to Australia at June! I'm 26-year-old Korean student. I was sick of my life. I always have to study hard, live productively. I had to do something to improve me all the time. I thought I couldn't live this way anymore, so I applied for a leave of absence from university. Now I am preparing to trip to Australia for walking-holiday. I wish I can do meet many people, do something new, learn english, learn more about life, and most of all, I want to be happy there. Here in Korea, I'm studying english to use in Australia. This writing is my first in this site: italki. I want to make some friend who can change languages each other. I'm good at Korean language. Thanks for reading. (please let me know how can I finish writings naturally.)
Mar 24, 2015 4:55 PM
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I'm 26-year-old Korean student.

I was sick of my life. I always HAD to study hard, live productively. I had to do something to improve MYSELF all the time.

I thought I couldn't live this way anymore, so I applied for a leave of absence from MY university.

Now I am preparing to TRAVEL to Australia for A WORKING-holiday. I wish I can meet many people, do something new, learn english, learn more about life, and most of all, I want to be happy there.

Here in Korea, I'm studying english to use in Australia. This writing is my first ON this site: italki.
I want to make some friendS who WANT TO EXCHANGE LANGAUGES. I'm good at Korean language.

Thanks for reading. (please let me know how can I finish writings naturally.)

NOTES:


CAPITALS = CORRECTIONS
- “A Walking-Holiday” = walking = 걷다. = Working-holiday is correct
- “who can change languages each other” = ‘want to exchange languages’ or ‘meet many friends and have language exchanges’
- (please let me know how can I finish writings naturally.) = ‘thanks for reading’ = perfect. OR ‘thanks for reading and have a good day’
So many Koreans are coming to Australia for work/ holiday! If you would like to exchange languages please let me know.
많은 한국 사람이 호주에 워킹/호로대이를 여행해요. 언어를 주다 받고 싶으면 얼려 주세요.

March 27, 2015
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