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My boring life i have just got laid of from my company, I'm completely depressed and sad, I have worked for 3 years after graduation, now I have to start afresh. I'm really disappointed about my self, even the job I've recently worked doesn't make me interesting, I don't have knowledge as well as experience. I want to start to learn again, but now I'm 25 years old , I'm afraid to start again. I'm looking for another job but nobody hires me. Day by day, I'm just at home and starring at my mobile phone to wait for some one to call me for the interview. I'm hopeless. Then I decide to view my English. I'm not good at listening and writing skill, so I need to improve them and I searched this website, I think everyone that read my entry, please help me to correct it because I want to take Ielts exam, I want to know where my level is. I love making new friends, especially from foreign country, because we can talk and discuss everything from on the sky to even under the surface of the Earth by English. Nice to meet you all. My name's Thuy. Now I'm unemployed and I'm waiting for another job, I hope my luck will come to me as soon as possible. God bless you as well as mine. :)
Mar 27, 2015 9:54 AM
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My boring life

i have just got been laid off by from my company; I'm completely terribly depressed and sad because I have worked for 3 years after since graduation, but now I have to start afresh. I'm really disappointed about in myself, and even the job I've recently worked started doesn't make interest me interesting, I don't have either knowledge as well as or experience. I want to start to learn again, but now I'm 25 years old <em>(it's so young! don't worry!)</em>, I'm afraid to start again <em>(when you have to start again at 50 then you might worry a little!)</em>. I'm looking for another job but nobody hires me. Day by after day, I'm just at home and staring at my mobile phone to waiting for someone to call me for the an interview. I'm feeling hopeless. Then I decided to review my English. I'm not good at My listening and writing skills are not good, so I need to improve them and I searched found/discovered this website, I think ask everyone that who reads my entry, please help me to correct it because I want to take the IELTS exam; I want to know where what my level is.
I love making new friends, especially from foreign countries, because we can talk and discuss everything/anything from on the sky above to even under the surface of the earth, by using/in English.
Nice to meet you all. My name's Thuy. Now I'm unemployed and I'm waiting for another job, I hope my luck will come to me as soon as possible. God bless you as well as myself mine. :)

 

<em>Thuy I made many alterations, but in fact I understood everything you wrote</em>

March 28, 2015
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My boring life

I have just got laid of from my company lost my job, I'm completely depressed and sad. I have been working for 3 years after graduation, now I have to start afresh. I'm really disappointed about with myself, even the job I've recently worked doesn't make me interested, I don't have any knowledge as well as an experience. I want to start to learning again, but now I'm 25 years old , I'm afraid to start again. I'm looking for another job but nobody hires me. Day by day, I'm just at home and starring at my mobile phone to wait for someone who call me for the interview. I'm hopeless. Then I have decided to view my English. I'm not good at listening and writing skills, so I need to improve them and I searched have found this website. I think everyone who reads my entry, please help me to correct it because I want to take the Ielts exam, I want to know what my level is.
I love making new friends, especially from foreign countries, because we can talk and discuss everything from on the sky to even under the surface of the Earth by English.
Nice to meet you all. My name's Thuy. Now I'm unemployed and I'm waiting for another job, I hope my luck will come to me as soon as possible. God bless you as well as mine. :)

March 27, 2015
My major Business Administration. You mean "You have not free time for a long time". Don't worry. Now you have.
March 28, 2015
Are you applying job from internet? I think there are many bugs nowadays. Too much auto search. Maybe like here, you should add languages that you dont learn so that you can see others people who you never meet and them may lead you to new load
March 28, 2015
are you looking for another job and what's your major? It has been for 1 week and I applied some companies and what I receive is that there's no reply for me, now I'm really nervous because I don't have free time for a long time, It's like a nightmare to me, maybe I'm obsessed with the job. :))
March 28, 2015
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