Please correct my passage. We hoped the show will went smoothly until the end of the show and make impression to all spectators. We all showed fullest. We hoped the spectators will received suggestion

Rosmita

Please correct my passage. We hoped the show will went smoothly until the end of the show and make impression to all spectators. We all showed fullest. We hoped the spectators will received suggestion from this story is “Lying is a bad thing.”

Mar 28, 2015 9:35 AM

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Please correct my passage.

We hoped the show will wentgo smoothly until the end of the show and make impression to all spectators. We all showed fullest. We hoped the spectators will received suggestion/conclusion/moral from this story is “Lying is a bad thing.”

March 28, 2015

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