Beautiful Cities Well, it’s not easy for me to say what city was the most beautiful, that I have ever seen. That because, I have been to three beautiful cities. Cites that I have been to; were Izmir i

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Beautiful Cities Well, it’s not easy for me to say what city was the most beautiful, that I have ever seen. That because, I have been to three beautiful cities. Cites that I have been to; were Izmir in Turkey, Istanbul in Turkey and Tokyo in Japan. They are really very beautiful places. If I should choose one, I would say Tokyo in Japan. That because it is well organized, very clean and it has perfect people. It is difficult to say what was like. Certainly, I can say there is no place in the world as clean as Tokyo; it is the cleanest city in the world. The most famous place in the city is Tokyo tower. It is located in Minato, Tokyo and it is 333 meters tall. This tower is used for communications and observations. People in the city are very polite. They have the Japanese traditional bowing, that used as a greeting and it is a signal to respect .The people there are also hard working, Finally, I have to say I felt very happy, when I was there and I have honest respect to that great and kind people.

Mar 28, 2015 11:59 AM

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Beautiful Cities

Well, it’s not easy for me to say what city was is the most beautiful, city that I have ever seen. That because, I have been to three beautiful cities: Cites that I have been to; were Izmir in Turkey, Istanbul in Turkey and Tokyo in Japan. They are really very beautiful places.
If I should choose one, I would say Tokyo in Japan is the most beautiful. That because it is well organized, very clean and it has perfect people. It is difficult to say what it was like. Certainly, I can say there is no place in the world as clean as Tokyo; it is the cleanest city in the world. The most famous place in the city is Tokyo tower. It which is located in Minato, Tokyo and it is 333 meters tall. This tower is used for communications and observations.

People in the city are very polite. They have the Japanese traditional bowing, that used as which is a greeting and it is a signal to a sign of respect. The people there are also hard working,

Finally, I have to say, I felt very happy, when I was there and I have honest respect to that the great and kind people of Japan.

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March 29, 2015

Beautiful Cities

Well, it’s not easy for me to say what which city was the most beautiful, that I have ever seen. That because, I have been to three beautiful cities. Cites that I have been to; were Izmir in Turkey, Istanbul in Turkey and Tokyo in Japan. They are really very beautiful places.
If I should choose one, I would say Tokyo in Japan. That is because it is well organized, very clean and it has perfect people. It is difficult to say what was like. Certainly, I can say there is no place in the world as clean as Tokyo; it is the cleanest city in the world. The most famous place in the city is Tokyo tower. It is located in Minato, Tokyo and it is 333 meters tall. This tower is used for communications and observations.

People in the city are very polite. They have the Japanese traditional bowing, that used as a greeting and it is a signal to respect, the people there are also hard working.

Finally, I have to say I felt very happy, when I was there and I have honest respect to that the great and kind people.

March 28, 2015

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