Hunter Lee
A proposal letter Dear Sir or Madam I'm glad to know that a new swimming pool will be built in our town. The advantage of building this pool is obvious ,as people like go swimming but we don't have one before. One of my proposal is where we build this pool should be considered thoroughly. In my opinion, it is better to build this new pool in town center instead of outside of town. If it is located out of our town, it is not so convenience for most of the people living in the town. Hope we can use this pool as soon as possible. Yours sincerely Hunter
Mar 29, 2015 1:50 AM
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A proposal letter

Dear Sir or Madam

I'm pleased that a new swimming pool will be built in our town. The advantage of building this pool is obvious. People like go swimming but there is no pool in town. I believe the location of this pool should be considered thoroughly. In my opinion, it is better to build this new pool in the center of town instead of outside of town. If it is located out of our town, it will not be convenient for most of the people living in the town. I hope we can use this pool as soon as possible.

Yours sincerely

Hunter

March 29, 2015
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