Edward Malone
Space war. We are fleeing to another planet We approuched upon Den and we explained him, that next case will be more serious. He understood us and he made his face very serious, as the main character in an action movie. Meanwhile the False Dmitry, having captain's status, drove the ship to the Green planet. It is so named because its surface had only jungles, lakes and one large ocean. Many more of surface had jungles. The ocean was on the south of planet. The Green planet had the very warm climate, on this both poles was without (of?) snow or ice. We needed to look for a place, where we could (to) landed. -Captain Dmitry! I... - began I -Just cap - Hi said slowly. Him voice sounded very solidly -Well, cap, how many time we will spend for landed? And what sort of problems we would meet on this planet? -We will land (or landed?) in 5 hours, about it. We must be ready to any problems. The Goomey is very powerful lord, because many people decided to join him. Also among them are some powerful magicians. -I heard that one of them has 99 level. Hin name is Greet Boris. -This magician is very dangerous. He can get up HP for 100 soldiers at a time! If he fart, many people get grang damage. A shock wave of the such strike can to go 10 miles around. We have magical shields against this atack, but... -But what? -If Goomey is somewhere near and He fart at a time too... We would not back to our ship. We must be careful. It's very serious case
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Space war. We are fleeing to another planet

 

We approuchedapproached upon Den and we explained to him, that next casemission willwould be more serious. He understood us and he made his facehis expression became very serious, as like the main character in of an action movie.


Meanwhile, the Ffalse Dmitry, having the status of Captain captain's status, drove the ship to the Green planet. It is so named because its surface hadhas only jungles, lakes and one large ocean, and is mostly covered by jungles. Many more of surface had jungles. The ocean was located toon the south of planet. The Green planet hadhas thea very warm climate, on thisand both poles wasare without (of?) snow or ice.

 

We needed to look forfind a place, where we could (to) landedland.


-Captain Dmitry! I... - began I "Captain Dmitry!" I began.

-Just cap - Hi said slowly. Him voice sounded very solidly "Just Cap," he said slowly. His voice sounded very solid.
-Well, cap, how many time we will spend for landed? And what sort of problems we would meet on this planet? "Well, Cap, when will we land? And what sort of problems would we encounter on this planet?"
-We will land (or landed?) in 5 hours, about it. We must be ready to any problems. The Goomey is very powerful lord, because many people decided to join him. Also among them are some powerful magicians. "We will land in about 5 hours. We must be prepared for any problems. The Goomey is a very powerful lord because many people have decided to join him. Among them are some powerful magicians."

-I heard that one of them has 99 level. Hin name is Greet Boris. "I heard that one of them is level 99. His name is Greet Boris."
-This magician is very dangerous. He can get up HP for 100 soldiers at a time! If he fart, many people get grang damage. A shock wave of the such strike can to go 10 miles around. We have magical shields against this atack, but... "That magician is very dangerous. He can heal the HP of 100 soldiers at a time! If he farts, many would receive damage. The shock wave of the attack can travel up to 10 miles away. We have magicial shields against it, but..."

-"But what?" "But what?"
-If Goomey is somewhere near and He fart at a time too... We would not back to our ship. We must be careful. It's very serious case "If Goomey is nearby and he farts at the same time... we would not make it back to our ship alive. We must be careful. It's a very dangerous mission."

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