Tommy
Morning As usual my alarm clock rang at six o'clock. Took glass of water and i was ready to go on a training (workout/crossfit?). This morning was so cold and snowing, It is uncommon for Ukraine in Spring. After an hour of workout i am ready to start working Monday. Good workweek for everyone!
Mar 30, 2015 12:22 PM
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Morning

As usual my alarm clock rang at six o'clock. I took a glass of water and i was ready to go on a training session (workout/crossfit?)*. This morning was so very cold and snowing snowy*. It This is uncommon for Ukraine in Spring.
After an hour of workout i I am*** ready to start working on Monday.

Good workweek for everyone!

 

*It depends. Workout and trainning session are synonyms. In fact the definition of "workout" is: a session of vigorous physical exercise or trainning. Crossfit is a specific type of training session involving a specific set of exercises.

 

** To use snowing, it's better to write: It was snowing this morning.

 

*** If you mean this as a general rule: every Monday after an hour of workout you're ready to start working, then the structure is fine. If you meant it for a specific Monday, it's best to write: After an hour of workout I was ready to start working on Monday.

 

<em>Good job :) </em>

March 30, 2015
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