I Went to the Mountain Near My Home. <<
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Even
though I woke up late
in the afternoon, I went to the mountain by myself. <strike>in the afte</strike>rnoon.
Because it's winter, people like to hike or exercsie there. <strike>because of the winter. now , in Korea It's winter. </strike>
'It's winter in Korea now. <<< 단어 순서가 공부히세요.
When I was
at the base of the mountain, I
felt fresh and cool.
I really love tree
s and pla
nts. It makes me feel comfortable. <<<<
복수형도공부해야돼요.
<strike>So,,</strike>
<strike> </strike>I've decided to go to the moutain
s regularly, if I can make time.
It
would be good for my health.
P.S. I'm wondering,
when I write
a notebook
entry can I add a photo?
Yes you can.
Can someone who knows
how to add
a photo
please explain to me how to do it?
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