Elisabetta
NOW I KNOW “You are the Red Line, aren’t you?” Hassan said, looking over Masotti’s shoulders. The Cardinal nodded. “I was only a child but I still remember your face. You were in my father’s palace when your soldiers killed him. You were the boss and ordered that massacre.” “It was a terrible mistake, Hassan. The Illuminati are the only guilty party. You know how perfidious and cruel they are. I was a stupid man, mislead like you.” Masotti justified. “Only the Christian faith showed me the truth and now we have to work together to destroy all of them. Believe me, brother. Embrace me, now! We can win our struggle.” He proposed. Inspector Falco and his team saw the scene from the screen. “What the fuck”” He exclaimed when Hassan-i-Sabbah collapsed on the floor. His eyes looked at the Cardinal schocked. Masotti blotted the knife on his tunic. Hassan’s blood coloured it. “Stupid, crazy Arab!” He said while bringing the Baphomet’s Skull from his hands. “How could you believe that I would respect our deal” he laughed hard. “now all the Skulls are under my will. Baphomet! Give me the knowledge!”he shouted. “I thought that he wanted the power.” Giovanna said when all the scrreen in the room stopped working suddenly. “Too long to explain. Wear these and follow me!” The Grand Master ordered, giving them the talisman. Then she reached Sonnac and the other Knight Templars on a platform made of steel. The inspector, the pathologist and the professor went after her. “My gun!” Falco asked before getting on the platform. The Grand Master nodded in agreement and one of his knight run to take it. When all of them were on the platform she press a button on a remote control and the platform begin to raise, meanwhile a complicated system pumped away the water on the pool above. The Salomon statue near it move on the left and the team emerged on the surface. They were exactly outside the circle in a place where Masotti couldn’t see them. A strong unusual wind was blowing while the Cardinal was screaming his prayer to Baphomet. The other Skulls were around him. They shone as if these words awakened in them old memories.
Mar 30, 2015 8:08 PM
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How could you believe that I would respect our deal How can I show respect to such an idiot!

 

he laughed hard. The Cardinal shrilled in mirth like a singing canary exposed to the first rays of dawn.

 

Now! All the Skulls are mine! under my will. Baphomet! Give me thy knowledge!”he shouted.


And I only thought that he wanted the his greed was for power.”

 

Giovanna sneered said when suddenly all the scrreens in the room flickered and died. stopped working suddenly.


Too long No time to explain. Wear these and follow me!”

 

The Grand Master ordered. giving them With the talismen secured around their neck, everyone followed suit.  . Then she reached Sonnac and the other Knight Templars were already on a steel platform.  made of steel. The inspector, the pathologist and the professor went after her.


“My gun!”

 

Falco asked before getting shouted as he approached on the platform.


The Grand Master nodded in agreement. and One of his [be careful, now the grand master turned into a man? LOL] the knights ran to take get it. When all of them were on the platformthe Grand Master she pressed a button on with a remote control and the platform began to raise.  meanwhile as complicated system pumped drained away the pool water on the pool above them.

 

The statue of Solomon statue near it move on the slid away left and the team group emerged on the surface. They were exactly just outside the circle; away from the line of sight of  in a place where Masotti couldn’t see them.

 

A strong unusual The wind was blowing while seemed like a howling wolf as the Cardinal was screaming shrieked away his prayer incantations at the Baphomet Skull.  All the other skulls were had formed a circle around him. They glimmered and began to shine brightly shone as if these words of power had awakened in them from slumber. Old memories began to revive and stir in those empty hollows. Life had returned.


All I can say is WOW! What a story!  The additional words were added to give more color to the paragraph. Otherwise, it would be quite unsatisfying.  It would be like dinner smelling so wonderful but the cook had forgotten to salt them.


Here are more titles for this chapter which I think is better than the one I first suggested.


The Wakening/The Rising/Slumber No More/Dreams No More


Because of your use of "perfidious" that I have found my perfect rendition of "Perfidia". This version really spoke the true feelings of the song.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pSLmvysfPAQ&list=PLF0C11350D5606CF2&index=11&spfreload=1 ;

March 31, 2015
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NOW I KNOW The Moment of Truth

 

So you are the Red Line..., aren’t you?” Hassan conjectured, said  looking over Masotti’s shoulders.

 

The Cardinal gave a slight nodded.


“I was only a child but I still remember but I cannot never forget this face of yours! face. You were in my father’s palace when your soldiers killed murdered him. You were the one behind boss and ordered that massacre.”

 

“It was a terrible mistake. Hassan. The Illuminati is are the only guilty party. You know How perfidious [Wow!  You know this word!  It is a word not many natives know.  The reason I know this because of a standard song, "Pefidia" Here's a link to the song sung by your countryman, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SMSQAncDR70] and cruel they can be! are. I was a stupid and reckless young man then, mislead like you are now.”

 

Masotti recollectedjustified.

 

“Only the Christian faith had shown me the truth and now We have no other option but to work together to destroy all of them all. Believe Have faith in me! Brother. Embrace me, now! Together we can shall triumph win our common struggle.” He proposed.


Inspector Falco and his team saw the scene from the continued glued to the screen as the scene continued to unfurl before their eyes...

 

“What the heck!fuck”

 

He exclaimed when In the screen was Hassan-i-Sabbah collapsing onto the ground floor. His eyes were glazed, looking at the Cardinal in shock.  Hassan's robes began to turn into an expanding crimson.    schocked. Masotti blotted the knife on his tunic. Hassan’s blood coloured it.


Stupid, crazy Arab Thou art an utter fool!”

 

The Cardinal took the He said while bringing the Baphomet’s Skull from his the dying hands.

March 31, 2015
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