The contest, "Best in Profession"
On March 24 in at our medical college there was a contest called "Best in Profession." <em>(In the U.S. punctuation goes inside quotation marks.) </em>I was a participant in this competition. I was prepared on the subject of Pediatrics. We had There were 5 people and we went into the training room. I pulled a the card and I knew the task of on the ticket.<em> (</em><em>I am guessing that you mean that you understood the task you were to perform.)</em> , I know. After I said recited <em>("said" is OK but in this case, "recited" or "repeated" is a little more natural) </em>the problem I went to demonstrate the manipulation of intramuscular administration of drugs to children. On Performing the manipulation, I made a mistake for which I have removed had 3 points deducted. <em>(You can say "removed" but if there is a total of twenty to start, we usually say that points are "deducted" from the total.)</em>
In the end, I took 2nd place by winning won 17 of 20 points.
<em>It sounds like you did pretty well in the manipulation in spite of the slight mistake. That takes both skill and composure. Congratulations Aniram! </em>