Vanessa V.
Who I am ? Well, I am a young Colombian women , I study modern languages and work too. I want to graduate and teach , I prepare to be a teacher of languages and get a chance to know other cultures and countries. I love movies, the food hahaha:3... sports and literature. I like different music genres and have moments of exploration about; respect the diversity, I am a spiritual person and I hope to meet you. My English is not the best so you will be very helpful...I will share what I know of spanish and my country! ;)
Apr 1, 2015 4:17 PM
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Who am I?

Well, I am a young Colombian women woman. I study modern languages and work too.

I want to graduate (from what?) and teach (teach what?). I prepare am preparing myself to be a teacher of languages and so/therefore get a chance to know other cultures and countries.

I love movies, the food hahaha:3...sports and literature. I like different music genres and have moments of exploration about; respect the diversity, explore them. I am a spiritual person and I hope to meet you soon.

My English is not the best around so you will be very helpful (helpful in what?)...I will share what I know of Spanish and my country! ;)

 

<em>Hello Vanessa.</em>

<em>Remember this: if you say "I want to teach", that is incomplete. After the verb "teach" you must always say a noun, or something. "I want to give classes" sounds better in that case.</em>

<em>I think there is lack of information you should add, for example "so you will be very helpful". Yes, but helpful doing what? In that case, you should say "So you will be very helpful if you correct my mistakes", for example.</em>

<em>I hope you find this informacion valuable.</em>

<em>=)</em>

April 2, 2015
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Who I am ?

Well, I am a young Colombian woman , I study modern languages and work too.

I want to graduate and teach , I am preparing to be a teacher of languages and get a chance to know other cultures and countries.

I love movies, the food hahaha:3... sports and literature. I like different music genres and every now and then listen to different kinds of music, I am a spiritual person and I hope to meet you.

My English is not the best so you will be very helpful...I will share what I know of spanish and my country! ;)

April 2, 2015
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