<em>Tadayoshi,</em>

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<em>First, your English does not suck... your written English is WAAAAAY better than my written Japanese and I am sure your spoken English is better than my spoken Japanese.</em>

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<em>It is good to see you motivatd to improve. I have corrected some of your post here. Your main problem is word order, which is common amongst Japanese English learners. Don't worry... practise will fix this and you can find plenty of English speakers here who can help you.</em>

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<em>Also, your English style is informal and that is a good thing for posts on Facebook and speaking but not for tests. I have underlined parts of your post that are informal and communicate fine but would fail any test situation.</em>

<em>Regards,</em>

<em>Jas</em>

Hello
The reason why my friend, who is a returnee student, can speak English kinda quite well is because he'd he was only been speaking only English when while he was in the an English speaking country.
But the problem for him is that he couldn't wouldn't get a high scores on the TOEIC or TOEFL or those kinds of tests if he took'em, because not only has he he's never studied English, but also he is surrounded by a bunch of Japanese people who can only speak only their mother tongue are surrounding him here in Japan.
Now, actually he  already forgets has actually forgotten a lot and can't speak English like before as well as he could before.
In this cases, I think here in Japan is literally a really bad environment for English learners to improve or even keep our their speaking ability of speaking.
I'm not the man who I'm talking about, but what I wanna say, tell and emphasize is that, as an English learner who is from Japan, is that it's too very hard for not everyone but at least my friend and me to speak English in Japan everyday.
I need kinda help..coz actually, everyone else surrounding around me's has English is twice as good as mine, and my English is what is called "sucks"..Fml. But no matter what happens, I'll continue studying like hell in order to catch up with my friend's English which is could be bad for natives, but it's exactly bitch'in for me..and I gotta get a high score on the TOEFL to be get into the United Strats States as a college student from next year..That's why I need ur helps n yeah, sorry, I forgot to say that I'm a naive native JAPANESE speaker.
I think I may be able to help the people studying JAPANESE..LOL..Maybe..coz I'm kinda fool..LOL
Thanks!

Hello????????????????

The reason why my friend, who is a returnee student, can speak English kinda well is because he's  been speaking only English when he was in (an English speaking country.) Which country? I understand what you're saying, but if you aren't specific with which country, it should take an indefinite article (a, an). 
But the problem for him is that he couldn't get a high scores on the TOEIC or TOEFL or those kinds of tests if he took'em, because not only he's never has he ever (I understand why you wrote it that way because it makes sense as a grammatical short-cut, but it doesn't sound correct to English speakers)  studied English, but also a bunch of Japanese people who can speak only their mother tongue are surrounding him here in Japan.
Now, actually he already forgets a lot and can't speak English like before.
In this these  cases, I think here in Japan is literally a bad environment for English learners to improve or even keep our ability of speaking up our ability to speak it.
I'm not the man who I'm talking about, but what I wanna say, tell and emphasize as an English learner who is from Japan is that it's too hard for not everyone but at least no one but  my friend and me to speak English in Japan everyday.
I need kinda kinda need help..coz actually, everyone else surrounding me's English is twice as good as mine, and my English is what is called "suck"..Fml..but no matter what happens, I'll continue studying like hell in order to catch up with my friend's English, which is could be bad for natives, but it's exactly especially bitch'in for to me..and I gotta get a high score on the TOEFL to be in the United Strats States as a college student from for next year..That's why I need ur helps n yeah, sorry, I forgot to say that I'm a naive JAPANESE speaker.????????
I think I may be able to help the people studying JAPANESE..LOL..Maybe..coz I'm kinda kind of a fool..????LOL
Thanks????

LOL Well hey there, I enjoyed reading and correcting your notebook entry! It's clear that you were misspelling some words on purpose, so I just corrected the things that would stand out to me as an English speaker in America. And personally, I think you're doing great! You serve as an inspiration to me because I can't communicate in my target language as well as you can. Pat yourself on the back! Good luck on the TOEFL! 

Hello????????????????

The reason why my friend who is a returnee student can speak English kinda well is because he'd been speaking only English when he was in the English speaking country.
But the problem for him is that he couldn't get the high scores on the TOEIC or TOEFL or those kinds of tests if he took'em, because not only he's never studied English, but also a bunch of Japanese people who can speak only their mother tongue are surrounding him here in Japan.
Now, actually he already forgets a lot and can't speak English like before.
In this cases, I think here in Japan is literally bad environment for English learners to improve or even keep our ability of speaking.
I'm not the man who I'm talking about, but what I wanna say, tell and emphasize as an English learner who is from Japan is that it's too hard for not everyone but at least my friend and me to speak English in Japan everyday.
I need kinda help..coz actually, everyone else surrounding me's English is twice as good as mine, and my English is what is called "suck"..Fml..but no matter what happens, I'll continue studying like hell in order to catch up with my friend's English which is could be bad for natives, but it's exactly bitch'in for me..and I gotta get a high score on the TOEFL to be in the United Strats as a college student from next year..That's why I need ur helps n yeah, sorry, I forgot to say that I'm a naive JAPANESE speaker.????????
I think I may be able to help the people studying JAPANESE..LOL..Maybe..coz I'm kinda fool..????LOL
Thanks????

Hello

The reason why my friend who is a returnee student can speak English kinda well is because he'd been speaking only English when he was in the English speaking country.
But the problem for him is that he couldn't get a high scores on the TOEIC or TOEFL or those kinds of tests if he took'em, because not only he's never studied English, but also a bunch of Japanese people who can speak only their mother tongue are surrounding him here in Japan.
Now, actually he already forgets a lot and can't speak English like before.
In this cases, I think here in Japan is literally bad environment for English learners to improve or even keep our ability of speaking.
I'm not the man who I'm talking about, but what I wanna say, tell and emphasize as an English learner who is from Japan is that it's too hard for not everyone but at least my friend and me to speak English in Japan everyday.
I need kinda help..coz actually, everyone else surrounding me's English is twice as good as mine, and my English is what is called "suck"..Fml..but no matter what happens, I'll continue studying like hell in order to catch up with my friend's English which is could be bad for natives, but it's exactly bitch'in for me..and I gotta get a high score on the TOEFL to be in the United Strats as a college student from next year..That's why I need ur helps n yeah, sorry, I forgot to say that I'm a naive JAPANESE speaker.
I think I may be able to help the people studying JAPANESE..LOL..Maybe..coz I'm kinda fool..LOL
Thanks!