Joy Kang
April 2
Today is very hot !Let me and friends feel uncomfortable.so we go to convenience store when lunch time,because we need some cool drinks!!!
Apr 2, 2015 7:41 AM
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April 2
Today is very hot !Let me and friends feel uncomfortable.so we go to convenience store when lunch time,because we need some cool drinks!!!
Correction:
Today is very hot! My friends and I felt uncomfortable, so we went to the convenience store at lunchtime because we needed some cool drinks!!!
Not bad!
April 2, 2015
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Joy Kang
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), Chinese (Taiwanese), English
Learning Language
English
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