Gisele Monteiro
本次博覽會的產品。 在展會上購買和銷售進口產品有很多中國銷售自己的產品。 當我去那裡,我只是看他們適合我們的習俗的方式。他們不會說葡萄牙語很好。 產品在今天的非常大的進口。 To better understand the text I write in English here. In the city where I live don't have many foreigners. But at the fair of imported products has many Chinese. When I go there I'm just watching the way they sell their products. The import of products in today's very large. They do not speak Portuguese very well. I do not know how they managed to get here in my city. But when I go there is where I have more contact with foreigners. :)
Apr 6, 2015 1:06 PM
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在我居住的城市裡外國人並不多

In the city where I live don't have many foreigners.

但在進口商品的博覽會上卻有很多中國人
But at the fair of imported products has many Chinese.


我只是去那邊看他們如何推銷他們的商品
When I go there I'm just watching the way they sell their products. 

 

他們的葡萄牙語說得不是很好
They do not speak Portuguese very well.

 

The import of products in today's very large.←?

I do not know how they managed to get here in my city. ←?

 

不過那邊是我最能夠跟外國人接觸的地方

But when I go there is where I have more contact with foreigners.←??

 

Sorry,

I tried but I'm still not sure what are you trying to say.^_^

 

April 6, 2015
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在展會上購買和銷售進口產品有很多中國銷售自己的產品。
當我去那裡,我只是看他們適合我們的習俗的方式。他們不會說葡萄牙語很好。
產品在今天的非常大的進口。

在進口產品買賣展覽會上,有很多中國人在銷售自家的產品。
當我在那裡,我只是看他們照著我們的習俗方式販賣產品,但他們葡萄牙語說得並不好。今天的進口產品真的非常大量,我不清楚他們是如何設法運到我的城市。
在那邊能讓我和外國人有更多的接觸。

To better understand the text I write in English here.

In the city where I live don't have many foreigners.
But at the fair of imported products has many Chinese.
When I go there I'm just watching the way they sell their products.
The import of products in today's very large.
They do not speak Portuguese very well.
I do not know how they managed to get here in my city.
But when I go there is where I have more contact with foreigners. :)

(Hello, Gisele my correction conjecture is founded on your Chinese and English statement. If I misinterpret what you want to express to us, please correct me. Thank you!
妳好,Gisele ,我根據妳的中英文敘述去推測並訂正了妳的小作文,如果有任何地方曲解妳原本想表達的意思,請您幫我做修正,謝謝!)

April 7, 2015
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本次博覽會的產品。

在展會上購買和銷售進口產品有很多中國銷售自己的產品。
當我去那裡,我只是看他們適合我們的習俗的方式。他們不會說葡萄牙語很好。
產品在今天的非常大的進口。

To better understand the text I write in English here.

In the city where I live don't have many foreigners.

我所居住的城市並沒有太多的外國人
But at the fair of imported products has many Chinese.
但博覽會上卻有很多中國人
When I go there I'm just watching the way they sell their products.

當我去到那裡時,我就只是看他們賣東西的方式
The import of products in today's very large.
今天進口的貨物量非常大
They do not speak Portuguese very well.

他們的葡萄牙語說的不是太好
I do not know how they managed to get here in my city.
我不知道他們是如何到我們城市的
But when I go there is where I have more contact with foreigners. :)
但當我到那裡,我和外國人有更多的接觸。 

Gisele,I try my best to revise your essay based on your English and Chinese version. If you have any problem about the revise, please feel free to contact me. 

April 7, 2015
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