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I want to correctly combine the following sentence. Can you help me? Turkey is among the countries with rich boron mineral resources. Moreover, Turkey holds 72 % of the world’s reserves for boron mineral through its 53 different minerals.
Apr 12, 2015 8:41 AM
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I want to correctly combine the following sentence. Can you help me?

 

Turkey is among the countries with rich one of the boron-rich countries, having mineral resources. Moreover, Turkey holds 72 % of the world’s reserves for boron mineral through its 53 different minerals. [Don't quite understand the way you wrote about the other minerals.  I assume that you wanted to say that Turkey is also rich in fifty-three other kinds of minerals. However, it should be treated as a separate statement.  For example, "Not only this, Turkey is also rich in fifty-three other important minerals." ]

April 21, 2015
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