Janet han
Should government spends too much money on developing space exploration technology? Nowadays, most countries pay highly attention to the space exploration, and an increasing number of people are concerned about the phenomenon. However, whether governments should spend heavy money on the project is certainly a controversial issue. In my opinion, it is necessary fro governments to improve the space exploration technology. Initially, it is obvious that as a kind of modern technology, the space discovery would eventually benefit to the whole society. And governments, the social leader, should be supportive financially to those beneficial technology, which is definitely their obligation. It seems that the technological area is not related to our daily life, and just ambition governments themselves. However, we actually are enjoying the convenience from the technology. For example, because of space study, we could find right way and destination by using satellites. Undoubtedly, satellites take a crucial role in the rescue work. Moreover, the universe is a mysterious place, and there are many unsolved problem. The development of human is a process of continual discovery and study. If governments stopped researching and promoting the area, the social development would also stop. Therefor in a long-term vision, the exploration has a positive effect on human. We do not think the the star and sky study and observation by our ancestor were meaningless, as we have got the benefits. So why the further sky research should be an insignificant program What governments are responsible for do, of course, refers to many aspects. For example, in addition to technology, governments also should give priority to investment on basic human needs, such as health care and public facilities. My view is that national capital should be proportionally and reasonably divided to each area. In summary, governments are in charge of wider space exploration, meanwhile they cannot ignore other investment parts that are closely related to citizens. Only by doing so can society maintain and prosperous development.
Apr 13, 2015 8:07 AM
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Should government spends too much big money on developing space exploration technology?

Nowadays, most countries pay highly a great deal of attention to the space exploration, and an increasing number of people are concerned about this phenomenon. However, whether governments should spend heavy a lot of money on the project is certainly a controversial issue. In my opinion, it is necessary for governments to improve their space exploration technology.

Initially, it is obvious that as a kind of modern technology, there is potential for space discoveries would to eventually benefit to the whole society. And governments, the social leader, should be supportive financially to those beneficial technologies. which is For me it is definitely their obligation. It seems that the research and technological field area is not related to our daily life, and just ambition governments themselves(unclear meaning). However, we actually are enjoying much the convenience from the technology developed today. For example, because of space study, we could find the right route for our and destination by using satellites. Undoubtedly, satellites take a crucial role in the rescue work.

Moreover, the universe is a mysterious place, and there are many unsolved problem. The development of humankind is a process of continual discovery and study. If governments stopped researching and promoting the area, then social development would also stop. Therefore in using a long-term perspective vision, the exploration has a huge potential positive effect on for humans. We do not think the the observation of stars and study of the skies sky study and observation by our ancestor were meaningless, as we have got had many the benefits from them. So why should further sky research should be an insignificant program

What governments are responsible for does, of course, refers to many aspects. For example, in addition to technology, governments also should give priority to investment of basic human needs, such as health care and public facilities. My view is that national capital should be proportionally and reasonably divided to each area.

In summary, governments are in charge of wider space exploration, meanwhile they cannot ignore other investment particularly parts that are closely related to citizens. Only by doing so can society be maintained and prosperous development be ensured.

 

Good writing, interesting topic! Hope the corrections help!

April 18, 2015
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