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spring rain Recently we do not have enough rain. So there are not water in the river and others. In this we got rainy day. Even though the amount of rain is a little, it is okay for the plant.
Apr 14, 2015 11:15 PM
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Recently we DID not (DIDN’T) have enough rain.
So there WAS not ENOUGH water in the river and others.
SO THAT’S WHY we got A rainy day.
Even though the amount of rain is ONLY A little, it is okay for the plantS

 

NOTES:
CAPITALS = CORRECTIONS
- Just remember to use the ‘past tense’ when talking about something that ‘happened’. ‘I do not do something’ – Present, “I didn’t (did not) do something = past tense
- “not water in the river” – I know what you mean = “was not enough water in the river” more natural.
- “in this we got a rainy day” – ‘in this’ doesn’t make sense here, but you can use so many different starting points = “so that’s why…” OR “Which resulted with us getting….”
- “is little’ = something is little = better to say = ‘only a little’ subject + only a little.

Hope this helps, please ask any questions, I will get back ASAP to you.

April 19, 2015
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