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حفلة شواء : A Barbecue سوف نستضيف حفلة شواء غداً . سوف نحن نشاء دجاجة و كباب في حديقتنا. دعونا عائلاتنا و سوف نأكل خارجا في الحديقة. الجو هو جميل ههنا. ليس بارد جدا و ليس حار جدا . انه معتدل. الشمس هي خارجة في مدينتي الحمد لله . ان شاء الله سيكون يوم جميل غدا. لقد زرعنا اشياء كثير كذلك طماطم و بصل و ثوم و ذرة ابي هو من باكستان و كان مزارع عندما هو كان شابا. و ثم يزوج و استقر في بريطانيا مع امي الحمد لله. ابي يحب ان يزرع محاصيلا في الارض و لكن انه ضعيف الان و لا يستطيع محراث الكثير. اتمني ان تستمتعون مفكرتي. ______________________________________________________________________________ Intended meaning: Tomorrow we are hosting a barbecue. we will grill chicken and kebab in our garden/allotment. We invited our families and we will eat outside. The weather here is lovely, it is not too hot nor too cold. It is moderate. The sun is out in my city praise to Allah. God willing we will have a lovely day tomorrow. We have planted a lot of things, like tomatoes, onions, garlic and corn. My father is from Pakistan and was a farmer when he was young. Then he married and settled in Britain with my mother praise to Allah. My father loves to plant crops in the Earth but now he is old/weak and cannot dig that much. I hope you enjoy my entry :) There were some words I had to use the dictionary for so I'm not if I used the correct words :/ What is another word for ضعيف ? My dad isn't weak, he just has to be careful so is there is a word for 'healthy but getting older' :D Thank you!!!!!!
Apr 14, 2015 11:33 PM
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حفلة شواء : A Barbecue

سوف نستضيف حفلة شواء غداً. سوف نقوم بشواء دجاجة وكباب في حديقتنا. دعونا عائلاتنا وسوف نأكل خارجا في الحديقة.

الجو جميل هنا، ليس بارداً جدا وليس حاراً جدا، إنه معتدل.
الشمس مشرقة في مدينتي الحمد لله .
إن شاء الله سيكون يوم جميل غدا. لقد زرعنا أشياء كثيرة مثل الطماطم والبصل والثوم والذرة
أبي من باكستان وكان مزارعاً في شبابه، ثم تزوج واستقر في بريطانيا مع أمي الحمد لله.
أبي يحب أن يزرع محاصيلا في الأرض ولكن عليه الإعتناء بصحته الآن ولا يستطيع الحرث/ الحفر كثيراً.
أتمني أن تستمتعوا بمفكرتي.

 

Murdiyah: <em>As I told you last night "well done" :) And it's good that you added it to your Arabic entries, so everyoneone will notice it faster and correct it for you. Again my dear, pay attention to (واو العطف) and stick it to the word that comes after it and don't leave a space between them, this is how it's with this (و). Also add the hamzah (ء) when needed and a space should be left after the dot or the comma and not before them. Good luck to you, you are a very bright Arabic learner mashAllah.</em>
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Intended meaning:

Tomorrow we are hosting a barbecue. we will grill chicken and kebab in our garden/allotment. We invited our families and we will eat outside.
The weather here is lovely, it is not too hot nor too cold. It is moderate. The sun is out in my city praise to Allah.
God willing we will have a lovely day tomorrow.
We have planted a lot of things, like tomatoes, onions, garlic and corn.
My father is from Pakistan and was a farmer when he was young. Then he married and settled in Britain with my mother praise to Allah.
My father loves to plant crops in the Earth but now he is old/weak and cannot dig that much.
I hope you enjoy my entry :)

There were some words I had to use the dictionary for so I'm not if I used the correct words :/
What is another word for ضعيف ? My dad isn't weak, he just has to be careful so is there is a word for 'healthy but getting older' :D
Thank you!!!!!!

April 15, 2015
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حفلة شواء : A Barbecue

سوف نستضيف حفلة شواء غداً . سوف نحن نشوي دجاجة و كباب في حديقتنا. دعونا عائلاتنا و سوف نأكل خارجا في الحديقة. الجو هو جميل هنا. ليس باردا جدا و ليس حارًّا جدا . انه معتدل.
الشمس هي خارجة ساطِعَة في مدينتي الحمد لله .
ان شاء الله سيكون يوم الغَد جميلا . لقد زرعنا اشياء كثيرة كذلك كالطماطم و البصل و الثوم و الذرة
ابي هو من الباكستان و كان مزارعًا عندما هو كان شابا. و ثم تزوَّج و استقر في بريطانيا مع امي الحمد لله.
ابي يحب ان يزرع المحاصيل في الارض و لكنه انه أَصْبَحَ ضعيفًا الان و لا يستطيع محراث الحِراثَة الكثيرًا 
اتمني ان تستمتعون بمفكرتي.

ساطِعَة = shines

You can say instead of ضعيف (weak) كبير في السِّن (old) 

بَدَأَ يكبَرُ في السِّن started getting old
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Intended meaning:

Tomorrow we are hosting a barbecue. we will grill chicken and kebab in our garden/allotment. We invited our families and we will eat outside.
The weather here is lovely, it is not too hot nor too cold. It is moderate. The sun is out in my city praise to Allah.
God willing we will have a lovely day tomorrow.
We have planted a lot of things, like tomatoes, onions, garlic and corn.
My father is from Pakistan and was a farmer when he was young. Then he married and settled in Britain with my mother praise to Allah.
My father loves to plant crops in the Earth but now he is old/weak and cannot dig that much.
I hope you enjoy my entry :)

There were some words I had to use the dictionary for so I'm not if I used the correct words :/
What is another word for ضعيف ? My dad isn't weak, he just has to be careful so is there is a word for 'healthy but getting older' :D
Thank you!!!!!!

April 14, 2015

حفلة شواء : A Barbecue

سوف نستضيف حفلة شواء غداً. سوف نقوم بشواء الدجاج والكباب في حديقتنا. دعونا عائلاتنا وسوف نأكل خارجاً في الحديقة.

الجو جميل هنا، ليس بارداً جداً وليس حاراً جداً، إنه معتدل.
الشمس مشرقة في مدينتي الحمد لله .
إن شاء الله سيكون غداً يوماً جميلاً . لقد زرعنا أشياء كثيرة مثل الطماطم والبصل والثوم والذرة
أبي من باكستان كان مزارعاً عندما كان شاباً، ثم تزوج وإستقر في بريطانيا مع أمي الحمد لله.
أبي يحب أن يزرع المحاصيل في الأرض ولكنة أصبح ضعيفاً الأن و لا يستطيع الحفر كثيراً و عليه الإعتناء بصحته.
أتمني أن تستمتعوا بمفكرتي.

Murdiyah: As I told you last night "well done" :) And it's good that you added it to your Arabic entries, so everyoneone will notice it faster and correct it for you. Again my dear, pay attention to (واو العطف) and stick it to the word that comes after it and don't leave a space between them, this is how it's with this (و). Also add the hamzah (ء) when needed and a space should be left after the dot or the comma and not before them. Good luck to you, you are a very bright Arabic learner mashAllah.
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Intended meaning:

Tomorrow we are hosting a barbecue. we will grill chicken and kebab in our garden/allotment. We invited our families and we will eat outside.
The weather here is lovely, it is not too hot nor too cold. It is moderate. The sun is out in my city praise to Allah.
God willing we will have a lovely day tomorrow.
We have planted a lot of things, like tomatoes, onions, garlic and corn.
My father is from Pakistan and was a farmer when he was young. Then he married and settled in Britain with my mother praise to Allah.
My father loves to plant crops in the Earth but now he is old/weak and cannot dig that much.
I hope you enjoy my entry :)

There were some words I had to use the dictionary for so I'm not if I used the correct words :/
What is another word for ضعيف ? My dad isn't weak, he just has to be careful so is there is a word for 'healthy but getting older' :D
Thank you!!!!!!

May 11, 2015

حفلة شواء : A Barbecue

سوف نستضيف حفلة شواء غداً . سوف نشوي دجاج و كباب في حديقتنا. دعونا عائلاتنا و سوف نأكل خارجا في الحديقة. الجو هو جميل هنا. ليس بارد جدا و ليس حار جدا . انه معتدل.
الشمس خارجة في مدينتي الحمد لله .
ان شاء الله سيكون يوم جميل غدا. لقد زرعنا اشياء كثير كذلك طماطم و بصل و ثوم و ذرة
ابي من باكستان و كان مزارع عندما  كان شابا. و ثم تزوج و استقر في بريطانيا مع امي الحمد لله.
ابي يحب ان يزرع محاصيلا في الارض و لكن انه اصبح مسنا الان و لا يستطيع محراث الكثير.
اتمني ان تستمتعون مفكرتي.
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Intended meaning:

Tomorrow we are hosting a barbecue. we will grill chicken and kebab in our garden/allotment. We invited our families and we will eat outside.
The weather here is lovely, it is not too hot nor too cold. It is moderate. The sun is out in my city praise to Allah.
God willing we will have a lovely day tomorrow.
We have planted a lot of things, like tomatoes, onions, garlic and corn.
My father is from Pakistan and was a farmer when he was young. Then he married and settled in Britain with my mother praise to Allah.
My father loves to plant crops in the Earth but now he is old/weak and cannot dig that much.
I hope you enjoy my entry :)

There were some words I had to use the dictionary for so I'm not if I used the correct words :/
What is another word for ضعيف ? My dad isn't weak, he just has to be careful so is there is a word for 'healthy but getting older' :D
Thank you!!!!!!

April 18, 2015
oh i am sorry i did not notice that someone corrected before :0
April 18, 2015
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