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Tonsure In former days, I had medium length hair. I could perm or dye or whatever on my hair but now, I can't. I have no hair to do. As time goes on, my hair keep growing but I can't wait to do. I didn't intend to tonsure. Never! But a hairdresser misundetstood my intention so I had to tonsure. I wish to grow my hair faster. But my very short hair has an advantage. I don't have to wash my hair everyday(lol, is it dirty?), and I don't have to comb or dry mine. Well, it doesn't console myself.
Apr 17, 2015 9:01 AM
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Tonsure

In the past, former days, I had medium length hair.
I could perm it, or dye it, or do whatever I wanted with on my hair, but now I can't.
I have no hair to do.
As time goes on, my hair will grow keep growing but I can't wait to do.
I didn't intend to get a tonsure. Never!
But a the hairdresser misundetstood me my intention so I ended up with a had to tonsure.
I wish to grow my hair grew faster.
But my very short hair has an advantage.
I don't have to wash my hair everyday(lol, is it this dirty?),
and I don't have to comb or dry mine.
Well, it doesn't console make myself feel better.

 

I'm sorry that you lost all your hair! If its any consolidation, I think you look great! :)

April 17, 2015

Tonsure

In former days, I had medium length hair.

-> In the past, I had medium length hair

I could perm or dye or whatever on my hair but now, I can't.

-> I could perm, dye or do whatever to my hair, but now I can't. 


I have no hair to do.

-> I no longer have hair


As time goes on, my hair keep growing but I can't wait to do.

-> As time goes on, my hair will keep growing and I can't wait. 


I didn't intend to tonsure. Never!

-> I never intended to get a tonsure. Never!


But a hairdresser misundetstood my intention  so I had to tonsure.

-> But the hairdresser misunderstood my intentions and gave me a tonsure. 


I wish to grow my hair faster.

-> I wish my hair grew faster. 


But my very short hair has an advantage.

 

I don't have to wash my hair everyday(lol, is it dirty?),

-> I don't have to wash my hair everyday(lol, is that gross?),

 

and I don't have to comb or dry mine.

-> and I don't have to comb or dry my hair

[so that the reader knows that you are talking about your hair]

 

Well, it doesn't console myself.

-> Well, It still doesn't make myself feel better.

[STILL is used to emphasize that no matter what, you still dont like your hair]

 

You'll be fine! I'ts hair and it will grow back C: 

April 19, 2015
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