Miriam
Children and technology Nowadays the most people are addictec to the technology or some tv show, I don´t know how to explain my point but I was a child the cell phone or tablet weren´t overriding on my day and I needed more time to play with my friends, we had too much imagination and practice sports, but I look my cousins and children from my neighborhood the only activity is check their cell phones and tablets on the streets alongside other child without movement than their fingers. On the other hand the cartoons or tv show are so stupid and awkward, I saw those and everything in the message is to be a knucklehead because is fine. To what extent is good technological advancement? What kind of limits are needed? Do we really know the content of what children see on TV?
Apr 17, 2015 10:48 PM
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Children and Technology

Nowadays the most people are addicted to the technology or some TV show. I don´t know how to explain my point but when I was a child, the cell phone or tablet weren´t overriding on my day. and I needed more time to play with my friends, we had too so much imagination and practiced sports. But now I look at my cousins and children from my neighborhood and the only activity they are engaged in / are doing is checking their cell phones and tablets on the streets alongside other children without any movement other than their fingers! On the other hand, the cartoons and TV shows are so stupid and awkward! I saw those some of their episodes and everything in the message is was about being to be a knucklehead as if it were just because is fine.

To what extent is good technological advancement?
What kind of limits are needed?
Do we really know the content of what children see on TV?

July 1, 2015
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November 30, 2015

Children and technology

Nowadays the most people are addicted to the technology or some tv show, I don´t know how to explain my point but when I was a child the cellphones (no space) or tablets weren´t overriding (What do you mean?) on my day and I needed (perhaps had more time? Why use the verb needed?) more time to play with my friends, we had too mucha lot of imagination and we practiced sports, but I now look at my cousins and children from my neighborhood and the only activity is check their cell phones and tablets on the streets alongside other children without movement other than that of their fingers. On the other hand Also, the cartoons or tv shows are so stupid and awkward, I saw those and everything in the message is to be a knucklehead because is fine. There is something wrong about the last part of this sentence. I don't understand what the message is. 

To what extent is good technological advancement good?
What kind of limits are needed?
Do we really know the content of what children see on TV?

 

On another note, don't have such a negative and conservative outlook on life. :) Don't worry, be happy!

April 17, 2015
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