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What is love??????? I don't sure, but I think Love is happy, heartbroken, is have fun as heaven, sometime you feel terrible as hellish. I think that's not good but when you are loving, you can't anything. I used to love him very much. Although we were far apart geographically.but I think he is change. I am always trying care for us love. I tried to tell him know I think is. I tried to tell him know i love you very much. But he always silence, i don't know is he think?, I don't know does he love me? I feel bad now. I feel too dependent on my love. I don't like it. I am strong girl and i do not depend anyone. Maybe he is not my man. I should love myself and confident about myself. If he chooses me, he will not have fortune to get me.
Apr 18, 2015 8:31 AM
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It is a very serious state of sickness.

It is the only illness that brings new life, and opposite to other serious

illnesses does not bring death.

Moreover, a physician is not needed to diagnose it, everyone can

make the diagnose by himself.

When the illness is contracted by two reciprocating human beings,

it also brings much happiness.

April 18, 2015
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What is love???????

I don't am not sure, but I think love is about being happy, heartbroken, is have fun as heaven (?) **do you mean**: feeling like I'm in heaven, sometimes you feel terrible as hellish  as hell. I think that's not good but when you are loving, you can't [do/have(?)] anything. I used to love him very much.  , although we were far apart geographically. But I think he is change changing. I am always trying to take care for us our love. I tried to tell him know I think is how I feel. I tried to tell him know  I love you very much. But he  is always silence silent, I don't know is he think? understand his thoughts, I don't know does if he loves me. I feel bad now. I feel too dependent on my lover. I don't like it. I am a strong girl and I do not depend anyone. Maybe he is not my man/the right one for me. I should love myself and be confident about myself. If he choose me, he will not have fortune to get me.(?)be happy to be with me.


I'm correcting on my iPhone, so I may have avoided some corrections. I'm apologizing if I corrected you if you did not want it, since it is a sensitive topic.


*Always write "I" (tôi) with capitalized letter.


**I know Vietnamese doesn't use verbs (e.g.: to play/playing/played) so it could be a challenge, but try to practice that.


I'm sorry to hear about that, I hope you'll feel better. Always be confident and strong. iI you don't feel he is the right guy, then it is better to move on and give some time to reflect :) 

April 18, 2015
Survival.yes "love could be topic help me improve my English" :)))
April 18, 2015
LOL. Do you break up with him? Love could be topic help you improve your English.
April 18, 2015
hehe really?? I think , I do not I do not express all my reviews, so english level not good
April 18, 2015
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