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A good new from a Spanish student Today I'm very glad because a Russian student has told me that she passed DELE C1 exam yesterday. We were working since one month or one month and half ago, above all, on the oral skills. Oral expression part has 3 tasks: the first one is an article in which you'll have to read and then explain it in a very formal way. In the second task you'll have to discuss the topic with the examinator, and finally, the third task you'll have a set out topic, you'll have to choose a picture according to topic and discuss why your choice is the best. It's in these cases when I'm very proud to be a teacher. Obviously, she has worked hard to pass the exam, I only helped her and showed her the best way to pass DELE C1, in particular, oral expression task. I love to be a Spanish teacher :)
Apr 18, 2015 9:30 AM
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A Good news from a Spanish student

Today I'm very glad happy because a Russian student has told me that she passed the DELE C1 exam yesterday. We were working since one a month or one a month and half ago, above all on the oral skills.

The oral expression part has 3 tasks: the first one is an article in which you'll have to read and then explain it in a very formal way. In the second task you'll have to discuss the topic with the examinator examiner, and finally, for the third task you'll have a set out topic, where you'll have to choose a picture according to that topic and discuss why your choice is the best.

It's in these cases like these when I'm very proud to be a teacher. Obviously, she has worked hard to pass the exam, I only helped her and showed her the best way to pass DELE C1, in particular the oral expression task.

I love to be being a Spanish teacher :)

 

Good stuff! Only a few corrections in red and my suggestions to sound more natural in blue/grey

News has no singular form. You could say "A piece of good news" if you mean just one news item, but in your text it's OK to just say good news without using an article.

Regarding you versus you'll, you would normally use the future tense (<em>you'll</em>) if you were telling someone what to expect in the exam. In your text, it seems that you are giving a general description of the DELE exam, so using the present tense (<em>you</em>) sounds more natural in this context.

April 19, 2015
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A good new from a Spanish student

Today I'm very glad because a Russian student has told me that she passed DELE C1 exam yesterday. We were working for about one month mostly on the oral skills.

Oral expression part has 3 tasks: the first one is an article in which you  have to read and then explain it in a very formal way. In the second task you have to discuss the topic with the examiner, and finally, the third task you have to pick a topic, and choose a picture according to that topic and discuss why your choice is the best. <em>cambie los tiempos al presente. suena mas naturel. puedes usar el futuro si quieres</em>

It's in these cases when I'm very proud to be a teacher. Obviously, she has worked hard to pass the exam, I only helped her and showed her the best way to pass DELE C1, in particular, the oral expression task.

I love being a Spanish teacher :)

April 18, 2015

A <em>(Some)</em> Good news from a Spanish student <em>(News is uncountable)</em>

Today I'm very glad pleased/happy because a Russian student has told me that she passed the DELE C1 exam yesterday. We were have been working since one a month or one a month and half ago, above all, on the oral skills. <em>(The present perfect 'have been' is a much better match when using 'since'. It's much more natural to use 'a' in place of 'one' in situations like this.)</em>

The oral expression part has 3 tasks: the first one is an article in which you 'll have to read and then explain it in a very formal way. In the second task you 'll have to discuss the topic with the examiner, and finally, the third task you 'll have a set out topic; you 'll have to choose a picture corresponding  according to a topic and discuss why your choice is the best. <em>(Use the present tense to describe a process or procedure.)</em>

It's in these cases when I'm very proud to be a teacher. <em>(It's at times like these that I'm very proud to be a teacher.)</em> Obviously, she has worked hard to pass the exam; I only helped her and showed her the best way to pass the DELE C1, in particular, the oral expression task.

I love to being a Spanish teacher :)

April 24, 2015
Final tense, maybe it's better "I love being a Spanish teacher"
April 18, 2015
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