angela wang
About my this week Although I was busy in this week ,I successfuly did two experiments. Moreover, I registered in this website and made friends with some people. How about your week?
Apr 18, 2015 3:12 PM
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About my this week

Although I was busy in this week ,I successfuly did two experiments. Moreover (1), I registered in for this website and made friends with some people.
How about your week?

 

(1) 'Moreover' is an old style word, and now is only used in formal writing. Here I would use 'also':

'I also registered for this website...'

April 19, 2015
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