Hana Hoang
Amateur Guide! Today is amazing day for me. I had a tourist in Ha Noi with my colleagues and my teacher. It was my first time I was an amater guide. Bruce who is an English teacher in my company. So, we invited him to go to visit Temple of Literature – Imperial Academy, today. We started out at 10:00 AM by motobike. He said: “I’m very curious and excited." We reached out at 10:30 AM in there. Aria who is one of my colleague to go to buy ticket to get in there. You know my English is not good. So yesterday I prepared information of Temple Literature history and wrote into my notebook. So,I could tell it to him about Temple Literature history. We tried to talk and explain detail some information for him. But he sometime couldn’t understand all of them. Although I didn’t have enough vocabulary when I talked so it was not a problem. We used phone and checked new words. He was still interesting to listen us. And then he read all information of Temple on the notice boards. At that time he could understand better. We talked about doctors’ stelas. I told him “Before I had a university’s entrance exam. I came here and prayed to get lucky for my exam. I touch 82 turtles' head. After finishing the exam. I passed it and got high mark.” Bruce smiled and said “No, you didn’t get lucky. Another words, you are very smart.” I laughed, too. The atmosphere became hot. After that, we went to visit Kings' altar. They are Lý Thánh Tông, Lý Nhân Tông, Lê Thánh Tông and Chu Văn An who is the first teacher on Lipreal Academy. We tried to talk more about them for him. Look saw the clock, it was 11:30 AM. We felt tired and hungry. We counituned to asouvenir shop for tourists to buy a gift for him. We got a rest. At 12:00AM we had lunch in a restaurant near Ho Tay Lake. The lake is a biggest lake in Ha Noi. The atmosphere is very cool and beautiful views. We ate some traditional Vietnamese food. Our dessert was coconut with ice cream. It was very delicious. Finally, we came back home. It was really interesting time. I think today is amazing day for us. My colleagues said “After today, I don’t know Bruce who understands true about information we told to him. If he understands wrong, we will be very ashamed. :p”. You know our English is not perfect.
Apr 18, 2015 4:30 PM
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Amateur Guide!

Today was anamazing day for me. I had a tour(or you were a tourist) in Ha Noi with my colleagues and my teacher. This first time that I was an amater guide. Bruce is a an English teacher in my company. So today, we invited him to go to visit Temple of Literature – Imperial Academy. We started out at 10:00 AM by motobike. He said: “I’m very curious and excited."
We reached there at 10:30 AM. Aria, who is one of my colleagues, went to buy tickets to get in. You know my English is not good. So yesterday I prepared information of Temple Literature history and wrote in my notebook. So,I could tell him about Temple Literature history. We tried to talk and explain  some information for him. But, sometimes he couldn’t understand what we were trying to say. Although I didn’t have enough vocabulary when I talked, it was not a problem becuase we used a phone and checked new words. He was still interesting to listen to us. And then he read all of the information about Temple on the notice boards. This way he could understand better. We talked about doctors’ stelas. I told him “Before I had a university’s entrance exam. I came here and prayed to get good luck for my exam. I touched 82 turtles head. After finishing the exam, I passed it and got high mark.” Bruce smiled and said “No, you didn’t get lucky. In other words, you are very smart.” I laughed, too. The weather got hot. After that, we went to visit Kings' altar. They are Lý Thánh Tông, Lý Nhân Tông, Lê Thánh Tông and Chu Văn An who was the first teacher at theLipreal Academy. We tried to explain more about them for him. When we saw the clock, it was 11:30 AM. We felt tired and hungry. We counituned to  shop for tourists to buy a gift for him. We had a rest. (or We rested.)
At 12:00AM we had lunch in a restaurant near Ho Tay Lake. The lake is a biggest lake in Ha Noi. The atmosphere is very cool and beautiful views. We ate some traditional Vietnamese food. Our dessert was coconut with ice cream. It was very delicious. Finally, we came back home. It was really interesting time. I think today is amazing day for us. My colleagues said “After today, I don’t know Bruce who understands true about information we told to him. If he understands wrong, we will be very ashamed. :p”. You know our English is not perfect.

April 18, 2015

Amateur Guide!

Today was an amazing day for me. I had a tourist in Ha Noi with my colleagues and teacher. It was my first time being an amater guide. Bruce, who is an English teacher in my company was invited to go and visit the Temple of Literature – Imperial Academy today. We started out at 10:00 AM by motorbike. He said: “I’m very curious and excited."
We arrived at 10:30 AM. Aria, who is one of my colleague decided to go to buy a ticket to get in there. You know my English is not the best, so yesterday I prepared information for the Temple Literature history and wrote it into my notebook so I could tell it to him about Temple Literature history.

We tried to talk and explain in detail some information to him, but he couldn’t understand all of them. Although I didn’t have enough vocabulary when I talked, so it was a problem. We used a phone and checked new words. He was still interestingly listening to us, and read all information of Temple on the notice boards. At that time he could understand us better. We talked about doctor Stelas. I told him, “Before I had a university’s entrance exam I came here and prayed to get lucky for my exam. I touched 82 turtles head after finishing the exam. I passed it and got high mark.” Bruce smiled and said “No, you didn’t get lucky. In other words, you are very smart.” I laughed.

The atmosphere became hot.(this means someone got mad, or weather got hot, so I would use "temperature" over "atmosphere".)

After that, we went to visit King's altar. They are Lý Thánh Tông, Lý Nhân Tông, Lê Thánh Tông and Chu Văn An, who is the first teacher on Lipreal Academy. We tried to talk more about them to him. We looked at the clock and it was 11:30 AM. We felt tired and hungry, but we continued to the souvenir shop for tourists to buy a gift for him (Bruce).

We went to go rest afterwards.
At 12:00 AM we had lunch in a restaurant near Ho Tay Lake. The lake is a biggest lake in Ha Noi. The atmosphere is very cool with beautiful views. We ate some traditional Vietnamese food. Our dessert was coconut with ice cream. It was very delicious.

Finally, we came back home. It was a really interesting time/(day). I thought today was an amazing day for us. My colleagues said, “After today I don’t know Bruce who understands true about information we told to him. If he understands wrong, we will be very ashamed. :p”. You know our English is not perfect.

April 18, 2015
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